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12/7/2016 c30 Ethan
Well that's sorta a happy ending in that they are starting to bounce back. I think the only two you didn't mention what they would be doing during the break was Matt and Charlie as far band members go but that could be brought up in the sequel. Oh and are Gen and Jacqui going to be in the sequel since they're in school too? That's another question to be answered in the sequel.
11/28/2016 c29 Ethan
Jewel is a backup dancer that was in one of your BTR stories for a bit right? Or is this a different girl? "Girls are weird man." cheers to that Patrick and Noah. I'd also like to what fishing has to do with songwriting because I don't see what either has to do with the other. Like is that how Tom and James got inspired to write or something? So that conversation between James, Patrick and Noah made me think about Air Hostess, What I Go To School For, and Fake and made me wonder what kinda songs that James and Patrick would right together since Patrick has a tendency to be a bit cheeky(I think that's the right word) at times. I wanna know what Noah didn't want to be said and why James is going to New York. It was nice of Jacqui to come see how Harry was doing and bring him all that stuff. Although I wasn't sure why he'd take that stuff and move it and not just put it back in the box she brought it in. Seems like it be easier to carry that way but maybe not. Guess it would sorta depend on how many magazines, dvds and candy there was. as it mentioned earlier that they dated before? I don't remember. Good for Harry on deciding to give up drinking. Hopefully he can stick to not drinking.
11/14/2016 c28 Ethan
Harry's awake! Yay! Just to be clear Sydney and Riley were talking about Dougie and Harry being super close slash almost married right? I mean that would make sense because ya know Pudd but I wasn't a hundred percent sure. Five years of being sober is a great thing so hopefully Matt can fight the urge and not throw that away. My guess on what's going to happen is DE/BP (can't remember what they're going by in this story) will go back to Australia, Harry will go to rehab to get better, Riley will take care of her school work and very hopefully Ronan get his knee taken care of all in time for for the sequel which I honestly didn't see coming since this is the first time you mentioned it. Not sure what the rest of McFly and Busted boys along with the Jacksons will be doing though so even if that other stuff I guessed happens(which I doubt I got all that right) there's still a lot left to wonder about what's going to happen. I think it might honestly be best if the Jacksons when home for a while because it really seems like they need to with Riley's school work, Sydney's homesickness, and Ronan's cancer but I can also see why it'd be hard for them to go since Harry is in the hospital and the other McFly guys are having their own troubles. Oh yeah and Robert needs back off and quit pushing the Jacksons into a decision on helping him or not. But that's what he does pressures them until he gets what he wants outta them. Ugh he angers me just thinking about him.
10/17/2016 c27 Ethan
Wow, Harry is in a coma. Didn't see that coming. Kinda wish we could see Sydney and Anna interact with each other more.
10/15/2016 c26 Guest
I'm so glad I came across this story and that you're writing in here again! I read all of your old stories and I love seeing the McFly guys and your characters now grown up and how they deal with these new things. Your stories are freaking amazing and I love the characters you've thrown in as well. They have great chemistry with the guys and have their own little relationships with them and each other that's so fun to read. I love it, please update again when you can!
9/17/2016 c26 Ethan
Good luck with your proposal Jake. Hopefully things are a little easier now that Ronan has told Fletch and Jake about his cancer. Still needs to tell his kids though. Even if it is difficult.
7/19/2016 c25 Ethan
Charlie having a pool full of money would actually be the opposite of the worst thing I've heard about him. I read people saying he was just doing the Busted tour because he was almost broke and needed the money. Dougie must be an exception to Riley thing for band leaders. No offense to him but Tom and/or Danny seem more like the leader/s of McFly. Plus I don't think she'd go for Danny because of Rhuben. Are we going to find out who Danny was on the phone with since he didn't say? Sorta think letting Dougie and even Patrick around fireworks would end up badly. Still kinda waiting to see what other surprises Ronan has to go along with Sydney's of having Anna on the tour with them.
6/8/2016 c24 Ethan
Twizzler straws are great if you can get them to work out how they're supposed to. Did Jacqui not get the Busted reunion tour memo? Obviously pigs can fly hahaha. Seems like Gen & Tom are both going through different stuff. Maybe they can help each other out. She sorta left abruptly but I can see why since she probably didn't want to think about Tom not having had a girlfriend since they broke up.
What happened to Ana, was she just there for the one show to cheer Sydney up? I just thought about that since she wasn't mentioned in the last chapter or in this one and I figured she'd travel on the bus with the other girls.
5/16/2016 c23 Ethan
Riley needs to be reminded that taking care of Dougie isn't her responsibility even if they are really good friends. Dougie is a big boy and can take care of himself. Sydney was kinda a jerk for throwing it in Riley's face that Jacqui knew Dougie's dad was talking to him and she didn't know. I can actually see Danny react like he did to scoring that goal against Rhuben in their little pick up game. "I feel like something's wrong." more than you know Rhuben, more than you know. Is there anyone that Riley and Rhuben meet that can tell them apart right away? Seems like everyone gets them mixed up for a while when they meet. You can quit smoking Matt, you can do it! Do get too ahead of yourself James, just focus on the shows your currently doing. Is Tom struggling with his bi-polar disorder? Is that what was wrong with him at the end of the chapter?
3/30/2016 c22 Etha
I was going to ask where these sudden feeling Jacqui has for Dougie came from, and did I understand it right that she had/has feelings for Dougie but isn't pursuing them because of her past relationship with Harry and Dougie's past relationship with Riley making Jacqui unsure of what to do about her feelings for him. I'm going to have to go and read those other stories to get a better idea of where that whole thing is coming from if those stories weren't deleted. That was a nice surprise for Sydney. I'm sure having someone else his age around will do him some good. Maybe you could somehow show how Riley and Rhuben are in terms of being the older siblings whose younger brother has a girlfriend. Does that make sense I was struggling with how to word that. Wonder what the other surprises are going to be. I do feel like I'm learning a lot about the McFly and Busted guys through this story because other than a few interviews and videos that I've watched and picked up on some stuff from those I don't really think I know much about them outside of the band stuff. Like Dougie & Danny having problems with their dads for instance. So at least for my own benefit I hope you keep bringing in things that for a newer fan like myself might not know about them. See ya in the next chapter.
3/1/2016 c21 Ethan
I'd have to go with the yawning over sneezing. I sneeze enough as it is. It was good to get into Rhuben's head a little more in this chapter, it may be by design but I don't think it happens very much. Same sorta goes with Noah. It'll be interesting to see how Charlie's talk with James goes. Hopefully they both can let cooler heads prevail as the saying goes. I will give him some credit cause at least he's shown some interest in clearing the air between him and the other guys. And I'm not sure what else he'd have on his plate but Charlie gets a high-5 if he puts pepper on his spaghetti cause I do that too. Oh, has Sydney gotten over being homesick or is that going to come up again? Just wondered about that.
2/3/2016 c20 Ethan
I didn't get Jacqui's joke, sorry it went right over my head. Go Matt! Way to put Charlie & James in there place, even if it's only temporary. Hearing about Patrick's last girlfriend moving away without telling him was sorta funny also probably would be really sucky if it'd happen to someone for real. Should Harry really be drinking so much during a concert? He's lucky he only blooded his hand, he could've fallen off his drum seat during a song and hit his head on something or fallen off the stage and gotten a concussion or something. Save the drinking for after the concerts please Harry. Til next time, cheers.
1/6/2016 c19 Ethan
Well I was going to start my review talking about Danny but I read your author's note and figured I'd start at the end of the chapter and got backwards. I think it's really nice to see Riley & Noah's relationship because you don't show it a lot. Perhaps you could counter/balance that by showing a little of Rhuben & Patrick's too or Sydney with just Riley & Rhuben since he sometimes ends up just being around everyone and not specifically one person. Poor Dougie it's always a drag having to take a bad test grade home to parents but by no means should he have gotten kicked (or hit) because of it. Tom don't listen to Jacqui there's absolutely nothing wrong with wearing a Star Wars shirt & pants. It's not overkill at all. Gotta be enthusiastic about something so why not let it be Star Wars :)
Lastly I'm sure to the right group of people or person Dougie would be fine cuddler(is that a word) but I think Danny would rather cuddle with someone else, ya know about 5'4"(am I close? Too short? Too tall? I'm guessing here), black hair with a few purple streaks in it, blue eyes, Australian...you get who I mean lol. Wasn't there something between Danny & Rhuben before in the past, maybe that's where they'd like to keep it too I don't know that's not up to me to decide. I just thought of this so it's getting added on here at the end, was this a different day from the last chapter with Ronan & Patrick because if it's not wouldn't Tom have run into them when he got to the gym? Just wondered about that. Alright that's all. Cheers :)
12/27/2015 c13 1lessthanthreedougie
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO FREAKING MUCH HOLY CRAP THIS IS ALL I WANT IN MY LIIIIIIIFE! Just, you know, casually buying wands at the studio tour, running into dougie poynter on the street, nonchalantly taking care of my husband and asking how he's handling his whole dad situation...WHY ISNT THIS REAL?! 33333333333 I freaking love it so much!
12/27/2015 c8 Jacqui
Hey! So I'm reading this at work, under my Harry Potter blanket. I was lightly swaying in my chair as Jacqui was spinning in hers. YOU HAVE ME DOWN SO WELL! Hahahah! I'm loving this 3 3 Sorry it's taken me so long to get back to it!
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