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9/6/2020 c4 Guest
More please!
5/26/2020 c4 Nathalbama
That was really good now I really want to read more of the Story
2/1/2020 c4 23GoldenDragonKnight
Can’t wait for more chapters
2/1/2020 c1 GoldenDragonKnight
Nice beginning
5/6/2019 c8 darkstel
I don't mind rewriting, but how long will it take?
5/3/2019 c8 Mink
You probably should I read it and there's a fair amount of grammar/spelling errors in it.
4/18/2019 c8 Guest
I think rewriting the story is a good idea, but you can have Malum having a thing for Jade.
7/26/2018 c7 1TheWhisperingWarrior
I really enjoy this story and like how Hsi Wu and Drago (well future Drago) are trying to be good. Like Jade I have a soft spot for the sky demon.
6/13/2015 c6 Thee Egyptian Dragon
Please keep writing its getting good!
3/10/2015 c4 nightmaster000
Interesting story.

I'm curious will you have Hsi Wu walk the path of redemption?
1/15/2015 c1 2sparkbot
First piece of advice: Make sure you spell everything correctly. It's Bai, not Bia.

Also, how familiar are you with Chinese myth and culture?
1/15/2015 c1 20DONOVAN94
A good beginning, though I feel like we were given the draft of the story more then the prologue. Perhaps next time, don't skim over bits and pieces but give us details enough so that we get a sense of the backstory instead of just bullet-points.
I would love to see how the relationship between Bai Tsa and Malum first progressed and how they became close. But keep going.
1/14/2015 c1 24Aganos
By the way feel fee to review and give me you idea's and suggestions

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