5/26/2020 c4 Nathalbama
That was really good now I really want to read more of the Story
That was really good now I really want to read more of the Story
5/3/2019 c8 Mink
You probably should I read it and there's a fair amount of grammar/spelling errors in it.
You probably should I read it and there's a fair amount of grammar/spelling errors in it.
4/18/2019 c8 Guest
I think rewriting the story is a good idea, but you can have Malum having a thing for Jade.
I think rewriting the story is a good idea, but you can have Malum having a thing for Jade.
7/26/2018 c7 1TheWhisperingWarrior
I really enjoy this story and like how Hsi Wu and Drago (well future Drago) are trying to be good. Like Jade I have a soft spot for the sky demon.
I really enjoy this story and like how Hsi Wu and Drago (well future Drago) are trying to be good. Like Jade I have a soft spot for the sky demon.
3/10/2015 c4 nightmaster000
Interesting story.
I'm curious will you have Hsi Wu walk the path of redemption?
Interesting story.
I'm curious will you have Hsi Wu walk the path of redemption?
1/15/2015 c1 2sparkbot
First piece of advice: Make sure you spell everything correctly. It's Bai, not Bia.
Also, how familiar are you with Chinese myth and culture?
First piece of advice: Make sure you spell everything correctly. It's Bai, not Bia.
Also, how familiar are you with Chinese myth and culture?
1/15/2015 c1 20DONOVAN94
A good beginning, though I feel like we were given the draft of the story more then the prologue. Perhaps next time, don't skim over bits and pieces but give us details enough so that we get a sense of the backstory instead of just bullet-points.
I would love to see how the relationship between Bai Tsa and Malum first progressed and how they became close. But keep going.
A good beginning, though I feel like we were given the draft of the story more then the prologue. Perhaps next time, don't skim over bits and pieces but give us details enough so that we get a sense of the backstory instead of just bullet-points.
I would love to see how the relationship between Bai Tsa and Malum first progressed and how they became close. But keep going.