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12/8/2020 c52 monsuno power
Great chapter, as usual. Hope to read you soon.
11/6/2020 c51 monsuno power
I loved when Joey said: Attention Kaiba and Yugi, and the part where Yami and Kaiba made her stay in chair, and the straping to bed,so queen Mana was a nice touch. Cant wait for nex chapter. Hope to read you soon.
10/9/2020 c50 monsuno power
I realy liked this, it will be interesting with Noah around. Hope to read you soon.
8/11/2020 c48 monsuno power
Nice chapter. Hope to read you soon.
7/8/2020 c47 monsuno power
I love this, Seto is Mana brother is the best thing ever. I wonder what their reaction will be to Mahads death. I like how Marik actualy tells them some of the stuff from past lifes, its better than just saying:Oh you were the Pharaoh, I want your Ishizu remember anyting about her past life,like Mahad and his duel with thief? What about Kisara? I cant wait for next chapter. Hope to read you soon.
7/4/2020 c47 Guest
It's really good. As someone who is really liking this story, I wanna know why not update more chapters each instead of just one? I understand that you have a reason, I'm wondering because each month I'm eager to see more and a month really drags out.
But please keep up the good work until the end. I do get annoyed when writers never finish the story when it's so good and you just want to see more.
Looking forward to the next chapter! :)
6/11/2020 c46 jon12231223
need more
6/8/2020 c47 57Velgamidragon
Hey, you accidentally posted a chapter for a Harry Potter fanfic onto a Yugioh story.
5/27/2020 c43 5Linariel
I’m looking forward to seeing how you handle Noah’s arc. Now we have another sibling in the family I can only wonder how it will affect things. I’m hoping with everyone being forced to duel for their bodies Mana will also duel. I’d like to see more of this 4 star duelist I keep hearing about especially since Yugi and Grandpa Muto helped her train. I also predict we will see a lot of Seto, Mokuba, and Mana bonding perhaps some flashbacks too? Ooh I can’t wait to see how you write this! Thank you so much for writing this story. I can’t wait to read more soon please continue when you can!
( sorry this is in three parts I forgot it only lets you write so much per review)
5/27/2020 c44 Linariel
(Continued review)I like the slow and gradual growth of Mana and Yami’s feelings for each other even when he can’t remember his past Atem does know he cares about her greatly. The entire prophecy between them was great to see their past love affecting the future. But I like how this was an eventual reveal and they didn’t simply start knowing they were a couple right away. Really well done.

I like all the added Egyptian themes and situations I thought it was really fun to get deeper into the culture and history of Atem and Mana’s past. I don’t know why but I also enjoy all the interactions between Bakura, Mana and Atem. The twist of Mana’s death was intense to read and heartbreaking but impressive. Really well done for anyone to have to remember something like that would be harsh. Interesting idea the whole sibling situation at the end chapter I somewhat saw it coming but it’s still a surprise. Sort of explains one of the reasons Atem and Mana could marry in their past life. It also gives a deeper perspective on Seto I see him maturing in a lot of ways with the joint effort of Mana and Mokuba there is no way he can ignore his past life now. I think she fits well with those two but I’m glad she still wants to be there for Yugi.

Gah this story just keeps growing and growing into its own tale but definitely stays true to its roots in many ways. I really love how you’ve handled this and Mana’s gradual increasing importance in future events. This is really excellent.

I’m looking forward to seeing how you handle Noah’s arc. Now we have another sibling in the family I can only wonder how it will affect things. I’m hoping with everyone being forced to duel for their bodies Mana will also duel. I’d like to see more of this 4 star duelist I keep hearing about especially since Yugi and Grandpa Muto helped her train. I also predict we will see a lot of Seto, Mokuba, and Mana bonding perhaps some flashbacks too? Ooh I can’t wait to see how you write this! Thank you so much for writing this story. I can’t wait to read more soon please continue when you can!
5/27/2020 c45 Linariel
I really love this story so far. Honestly it’s always been my fondest wish to see someone place Mana into the modern Yugioh world. I wasn’t exactly sure how it would be pulled off but I was hoping for it. So thank you for making it happen.

At first the story felt like rehash of past events but gradually things grew more complex as we got further into the story. Sort of like when the storyline really picked up when Yami Bakura got involved. Understandable really given how cut and dry the beginning felt. I love the beginning bits making Mana an adopted Muto, her connections with the group, and dueling prowess. I really hope you include some more of that in the future. Then their was also the bit where she tried to stay behind and help Mokuba something I wish the others did every time I rewatch the episode.

But yes I really became sold on this story once the gangs first shadow game began. I always loved seeing them transformed as their favorite cards. Mana fit in perfectly in her Dark Magician Girl persona. It felt natural for her to play a part in the duel. Then the kicker was Mana’s interactions with Bakura as her memories started coming to her from her past. That whole scene was really so much fun. It really sold me that this story was not just adding in another character Mana has a part to play and she’s influencing the regular storyline in a way for the better.

I really think what I loved in the story was Mana gradually telling her own story and making her own decisions. The dreams she has of her past life are truly a highlight to read and picture. It’s good to see her backstory and feelings. I like the slow and gradual growth of Mana and Yami’s feelings for each other even when he can’t remember his past Atem does know he cares about her greatly. The entire prophecy between them was great to see their past love affecting the future. But I like how this was an eventual reveal and they didn’t simply start knowing they were a couple right away. Really well done.

I like all the added Egyptian themes and situations I thought it was really fun to get deeper into the culture and history of Atem and Mana’s past. I don’t know why but I also enjoy all the interactions between Bakura, Mana and Atem. The twist of Mana’s death was intense to read and heartbreaking but impressive. Really well done for anyone to have to remember something like that would be harsh. Interesting idea the whole sibling situation at the end chapter I somewhat saw it coming but it’s still a surprise. Sort of explains one of the reasons Atem and Mana could marry in their past life. It also gives a deeper perspective on Seto I see him maturing in a lot of ways with the joint effort of Mana and Mokuba there is no way he can ignore his past life now. I think she fits well with those two but I’m glad she still wants to be there for Yugi.

Gah this story just keeps growing and growing into its own tale but definitely stays true to its roots in many ways. I really love how you’ve handled this and Mana’s gradual increasing importance in future events. This is really excellent.

I’m looking forward to seeing how you handle Noah’s arc. Now we have another sibling in the family I can only wonder how it will affect things. I’m hoping with everyone being forced to duel for their bodies Mana will also duel. I’d like to see more of this 4 star duelist I keep hearing about especially since Yugi and Grandpa Muto helped her train. I also predict we will see a lot of Seto, Mokuba, and Mana bonding perhaps some flashbacks too? Ooh I can’t wait to see how you write this! Thank you so much for writing this story. I can’t wait to read more soon please continue when you can!
5/25/2020 c31 Linariel
You’ve really gained my approval even more with this story. I plan to leave you a long review when I get to the end of the current chapters but I just wanted to comment on this specific chapter.

Thank you thank you so much for how your handling Atem and Mana’s romance. I see it too often where people have a romance with Yami but they ignore Yugi and the fact it’s his body not Atem’s. It always makes me uncomfortable when dealing with Yugi/ Yami romances with girls. This couple keeping respectful distance when it comes to outward romantic displays is perfect. It respects Yugi and really shows how much Mana cares for her adoptive brother. This is perfect.

I’m going to go back to reading the story I just wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your handling of situation. Really made the story even more worthwhile for me!
5/10/2020 c45 Guest
I really love Yu-Gi-Oh! I love this story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Please update soon.
4/9/2020 c44 Samantha
Hay maybe if you do the nowa part then have her slap some since into him
3/12/2020 c43 57Velgamidragon
Already saw the Mana being related to the Kaibas twist from miles away, but I did NOT expect Seto freaking Kaiba to pull Mana into a freaking hug after their kinship was confirmed. That was super twisty! Like a pretzel. :P
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