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2/13 c1 160SideshowJazz1
I can't believe his parents won't even, you know, be a little bit sympathetic. They must know that no one cuts for no reason. It's just, if they were suddenly good parents without Tara around, why were they so terrible to Michael over something that hurt no one except him?
You know my stance on cutting in general and what it does, so I won't put that here. But I could tell the emotion was real in this story, so great job.
2/12 c1 5jcray73
I do like when realistic ways of thinking enter Goosebumps because you never know which way it could truly go and the stories for me become more...unpredictable. Michael is a character who had it bad because of his sister. And I think if anything your story serves best as a reminder of never knowing the struggle a person is dealing with. Poignant and dark. I like it. Please keep writing Goosebumps stories!

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