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8/1 c12 Mary-Ann
You cannot end it there! There is going to be a talk between those two and I don't have the patience wait for it...

Charles was right with having faith in Ann and her searching ability. She had no trouble locating him... and he noticed! Again how could you stop there?

Also, did Erik hear Charles say Ann's name or was that done telepathically? If not, Erik will have something to say I bet.

Gosh and Moira asking Ann if she thinks Charles is handsome...that was hilarious. I love this slowburn.
Please update soon!
8/1 c12 Intothevoid
Thank you so much for the update. I love these subtle differences when Charles interacts with Moira and Ann.
His flirty persona is one we can't ignore, neither can Moira but with Ann it is different. Which tells me he really likes her or he just wants to be the centre of attention with everything and everyone.
I am incredibly excited for the next chapter! Knowing Charles he will want to get to the bottom of Ann entering his mind.
Thank you so much and have a great day
7/31 c12 8Cassie-011
Maybe it's when she isn't trying to hard she's able to easily locate or when there is already a bond or some sort of connection already formed... also isn't doing Charles any favors flirting with Moria in front of Ann or with her at all if he does 'desire' Ann...which I assume he does since he legit wants Ann and Erick nowhere near one another after the few encounters he has seen them have so far lol
7/31 c12 1NetteBS
<3
7/15 c11 Mary-Ann
Although I was hoping for Charles to have a conversation with Ann, this was way better.

Erik might have told merely the big line in his story but I loved how he explained to Ann why he'd behaved the way that he did.

The second he touched her arm and felt sad because she didn't have a tattoo was endearing.

I wonder how he will behave from now on now that he knows she was sent to a camp with her sister and that her mother was murdered in front of her.

I loved Charles being jealous at the end.

Can't wait for the next chapter! Thank you so much
7/14 c11 WherewasLokiinEndgame
Nice chapter! :) really well written, just one thing about the translations (correct: Du musst ver?ngstigt gewesen sein - you must have been afraid) :)
7/13 c11 Guest
i love this!
7/12 c11 Intothevoid
Thank you so much for updating.
I'm thrilled we got to see some of Ann's past and that her and Erik got to have a talk.
His response when she showed him her arm was bittersweet...I really felt that.
So this has got me wondering...was it actually Ann who miraculously made herself vanish from the train...or was it her sister's doing?
Based on what she whispered to Ann as well as Ann's own power being something very specific already...I truly suspect it was Hilde who teleported Ann off the train.

Like Erik I am also left with more questions now lol. Please update soon
7/12 c11 Starsky
Thanks for another lovely chapter.
Charles really is incapable of finding the correct words when talking to Ann. Considering he's pretty educated, it shows how much work he invested in his studies instead of social interactions.
Regarding your use of the German phrases: All translations are correct, the only thing that could be improved is the use of "Sie". You see, this form of address is the more formal translation of "you", while the less formal "du" would fit better since they are on first-name basis and addressed each other with the latter in the German dubbing of the movie. But that's just my opinion and please don't apologize because a chapter is a little longer, it was very enjoyable to read.
Looking forward to future chapters and until then best wishes to you.
7/12 c11 8Cassie-011
Haha, Charles is so jealous and I don't think even fully realizes he is ... also I am so curious about her mutation, clearly its more then just being able to locate someone! Can't wait to read more!
7/1 c10 Cassie-011
I want to say Charles, but it also may be Eric...grrrr need the next chapter now lol
6/29 c10 Isanxd
I hope it’s Erik who asked Ann for a walk. I also wonder about Ann’s past since she doesn’t act like she has the same past as Erik.
6/29 c10 Starsky
First of all, thank you for another great chapter!
Secondly, I totally agree that Charles is too quick to use his powers all toe instead of talking it out or waiting till people trust him. It would be really fun to have him catch something up he doesn't want to know or hear. Maybe what it's like for a telepath to listen to the thoughts of a person with a catchy tune?
Thirdly, I would love to have Ann and Erik go for a walk since it seemed in the chapter like Charles was done with the day after his conversation in the taxi (and because I simply ship the two of them together and because the man tends to bottle up his problems far too often). But that's just my opinion, I believe either way you write it will be interesting.
Looking forward to the next update, and until then best wishes to you.
6/29 c10 Mary-Ann
Thank you so much for the update! It has been too long.

The brother and sister banter was great. With Raven hating on Charles' choice of outfit as well as telling him on how not to act towards new mutants.

But the best moment was between Erik and Charles.
Although Erik had no right to be upset with Charles. He was only protecting Ann's past...she probably doesn't even know that Charles knows.
I mean clearly Charles can't even begin to comprehend the sort of emotions Erik is experiencing given that Ann is not only a mutant but Jewish as well...

I still think Charles is a better match for her even if they have a different history. Besides their connection just sparkles of the screen every time I read about them.

So to answer your question on who I want to talk to Ann first.
It's Charles. Hands down.

Also was that a McDonald's meal she and Raven were eating? Genius.
6/28 c10 Intothevoid
I was so happy to see an update!
I love the different scenes. Everyone gets a moment to take the spotlight and so much is happening!
Am I the only one that noticed how anxious and angry Charles was during that car ride?
As for your question...I don't know who I want it to be standing at Ann's door...
On one hand Charles, simply because their dynamic just flows and is always amazing (and I love those two...)
On the other hand Erik because they need to have a talk especially since he scared her by blocking her way out the night before after discovering they share the same history.
I'll just be Switzerland for this round. But I would love to see another update soon!
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