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7/31 c12 11persaphones
Gosh, I loved this update! I love how you write Max and Georg's interactions, and I appreciate how Max is actually trying to help Georg think through what to do with his feelings towards maria. I also enjoyed that adorable scene at the end. It's very interesting to see how they both grapple with the fact she is leaving and I wonder how that will change as time goes on. Thank you for the update! x
7/28 c12 1Chris and Byng
I’m totally late to the party and just read all 12 chapters last night and today. I could not stop for a review at each chapter when I knew there was more. I just wanted to say this was beautifully written and the tension between Georg and Maria is palpable. I loved how Max has gone from the great protector or virtue to realizing he could push Georg towards a happy life. It’s so amazing how a small change in the story we all know can create such an amazing slow burn! Can’t wait for the next chapter!
7/27 c12 5juliemadlydeeply
Oh, I love good banter between Max and Georg, especially when Max is right and both of them know it! I do hope that Georg comes to his senses and follows Max's advice! I feel so bad for Georg and Maria, both so sure that their feelings are not only unreciprocated but completely unacceptable and foolish. You have built it up so wonderfully; it will be a great relief to (hopefully) finally see them communicate the true nature of their emotions with one another.
7/26 c12 Guest
This is seriously an amazing story, and I can’t begin to describe how excited I get when I see there’s a new chapter! Truly wonderfully writing, and I literally can’t wait for more!
7/26 c12 kk80
Thank you so much for the lovely update.
7/26 c12 Marzz
The ending tore at my heart. They are super tortured right now in expressing how the feel for one another. Max gave some solid advice I hope Georg takes it to heart.
7/26 c12 Guest
*InsertIncoherentramblings* Wow this chapter is so wonderfully written ! Georg and Max's discussion was so interesting, and I love Max for encouraging Georg to actually consider a future with Maria as a possibility !

The scene between Maria and the girls was both adorable and heartbreaking, and boy what could I even say about the last part except that the tension between them and their inner conflits are so well written, it makes for a perfect scene !

As always, I can't wait for the next chapter !
7/26 c12 Caitlin
This is wonderful, with each new chapter I’ve gone back and reread just to capture the absolute charm and also tension building between them. Can’t wait to see where this goes!
7/26 c12 reisova
First off all thank you for fast chapter, secondly this chapter is so good, so intense just beautiful. thank you
7/24 c11 kk80
Wow, thanks so much for the update. Loving all this tension!
7/24 c11 Marzz
My duo needs to communicate how they really feel but I am loving the tension between them. Keep up the amazing work:)
7/24 c11 Katie
So glad you updated. I’m obsessed with the story.
7/23 c11 reisova
I am so glad you are back. This is fantastic story and hope you will find time to write more often. I don't want comment this chapter whole story and concept is marvelous. Thank you
7/23 c11 juliemadlydeeply
Oh, I'm so glad to see you back with a new chapter! Your writing always contains such vivid imagery; I'm always impressed!

You illustrate Georg's inner turmoil so well, he knows that the most sensible thing to do is keep his distance, but he also knows that he can't stay away!

Maria's interactions with the children were so sweet! And, of course, I always love Max, especially when he is instigating in some way!
7/23 c11 11persaphones
So happy to see an update for this story! It is so interesting to see both Georg and Maria dancing around each other, and desperately trying to ignore/avoid their feelings - particularly in Georg's case. I would love to learn more about his thought process in a future chapter. Poor Maria, my heart breaks for her knowing she is upset about his apology, though the piano music did make it better. Thank you again for sharing!
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