7/24 c15 5OracleGuessMe
Great chapter, I only now came around to read it because I did not have time, and I love the story. I hope you continue soon
Great chapter, I only now came around to read it because I did not have time, and I love the story. I hope you continue soon
6/26 c14 OracleGuessMe
I really don't believe in destiny and fate in any matter...But it's interesting to read in a story
I really don't believe in destiny and fate in any matter...But it's interesting to read in a story
6/19 c13 OracleGuessMe
Okay now I am really hanging on this story, I want to know what happens next xD!
Okay now I am really hanging on this story, I want to know what happens next xD!
5/29 c10 MayDil
I notices the red hair kid! I think Harvey sees what he acting wants when he see the kid.
I notices the red hair kid! I think Harvey sees what he acting wants when he see the kid.
5/7 c9 OracleGuessMe
Oh god this chapter was lots of fun to read. I really never quite got why Harvey doesn't even play an instrument, but I suppose it just never fitted in the story.
Oh god this chapter was lots of fun to read. I really never quite got why Harvey doesn't even play an instrument, but I suppose it just never fitted in the story.
4/24 c7 OracleGuessMe
Okay so first of: Birth controls aren't that easy to just get, or if they are, that's wrong and not healthy. Second off: I don't think Donna can just take off her piercings, for at least two or three months, because then they would vanish and she couldn't take them in again. She can't take the Tongue piercing out, probably for a long time cause the healing process is so quick. Anyway, I just wanted to say that, but the chapter was interesting snd I hope you will update soon.
Okay so first of: Birth controls aren't that easy to just get, or if they are, that's wrong and not healthy. Second off: I don't think Donna can just take off her piercings, for at least two or three months, because then they would vanish and she couldn't take them in again. She can't take the Tongue piercing out, probably for a long time cause the healing process is so quick. Anyway, I just wanted to say that, but the chapter was interesting snd I hope you will update soon.
4/17 c6 OracleGuessMe
I hope you update soon, honestly this is something I really can't quite figure out how you plan on continuing!
I hope you update soon, honestly this is something I really can't quite figure out how you plan on continuing!
4/17 c6 11cammilu
I just read the last 2 chapters and I'm quite lost on how you are going to carry this story, the other day I read that one of the webisodes inspired you and now I'm just trying to relate everything :O I want to see how it continues!
I can't help you with the grammar, sorry xD I also use grammarly haha
I just read the last 2 chapters and I'm quite lost on how you are going to carry this story, the other day I read that one of the webisodes inspired you and now I'm just trying to relate everything :O I want to see how it continues!
I can't help you with the grammar, sorry xD I also use grammarly haha
4/10 c5 5OracleGuessMe
I just started reading this, I really likr it... I don't like Raul honestly, he isn't bad don't get me wrong. He is just super uninteresting for me, but the chapter was good and I am looking forward to the next ones!
I just started reading this, I really likr it... I don't like Raul honestly, he isn't bad don't get me wrong. He is just super uninteresting for me, but the chapter was good and I am looking forward to the next ones!