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8/1 c63 Guest
Another great chapter!
8/1 c62 Guest
Poor Shannon! haha Running into one of her exes. That convo was certainly good and awkward. And YAY for Kelly! Please update soon.
7/29 c61 Guest
Great chapter and now Michael knows how special Kelly is to Gibbs. I accidentally read the first chapter over before realizing that it was the beginning and then reading this showed how far this story had gone and now I hope we get a happy ending but think maybe there might be more coming from Pedro Hernandez's kids or one of Gibb's enemies or maybe another ex-wife or girlfriend will drop back into their lives. Looking forward to more of this AU.
7/27 c60 17DS2010
nice birthday surprise
7/27 c60 1CorinaJayden1
Liked this lighter chapter after having a few heavy ones. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
7/27 c59 CorinaJayden1
Cute little moment there at the end.
7/27 c58 CorinaJayden1
Really enjoying your take on this case and all the references weaved together. Really well done.
7/26 c59 17DS2010
Always liked this episode and your take on it is really good
7/25 c59 Guest
The last 2 chapters were great but a little confusing. I may have to rewatch some NCIS episodes to get all the links straight but you have me reading for the duration so looking forward to your next update.
7/22 c57 AshleyGranger2
Oh no. Things look like they’re going to get interesting. Shannon’s handling the mess pretty well, though, considering.
7/22 c56 AshleyGranger2
Glad those two were able to work things out.
7/22 c57 Guest
I remember how this got resolved in the show, BUT this time he has Shannon & Kelly to worry about and if the bullet is gone, Abbey has nothing to test? I have been enjoying this story of Gibbs WITH Shannon & Kelly alive but time for the Reynosa cartel to go to jail.
7/14 c56 Guest
Another chapter that moved the story along AND gave us some interaction between Gibbs and Shannon. The actress that played her mom did a good job of acting like the bitch you describe in this chapter.
6/27 c55 Guest
So glad that Kelly is ok! Hopefully the Fernández situation gets resolved sooner rather than later.
6/13 c54 Guest
Another good chapter and wondering which old enemies or characters from NCIS will show up next. This has been a fun read for the what if Shannon and Kelly had not been killed readers out here so we are waiting to see where you go with this.
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