8/1 c62 Guest
Poor Shannon! haha Running into one of her exes. That convo was certainly good and awkward. And YAY for Kelly! Please update soon.
Poor Shannon! haha Running into one of her exes. That convo was certainly good and awkward. And YAY for Kelly! Please update soon.
7/29 c61 Guest
Great chapter and now Michael knows how special Kelly is to Gibbs. I accidentally read the first chapter over before realizing that it was the beginning and then reading this showed how far this story had gone and now I hope we get a happy ending but think maybe there might be more coming from Pedro Hernandez's kids or one of Gibb's enemies or maybe another ex-wife or girlfriend will drop back into their lives. Looking forward to more of this AU.
Great chapter and now Michael knows how special Kelly is to Gibbs. I accidentally read the first chapter over before realizing that it was the beginning and then reading this showed how far this story had gone and now I hope we get a happy ending but think maybe there might be more coming from Pedro Hernandez's kids or one of Gibb's enemies or maybe another ex-wife or girlfriend will drop back into their lives. Looking forward to more of this AU.
7/27 c60 1CorinaJayden1
Liked this lighter chapter after having a few heavy ones. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
Liked this lighter chapter after having a few heavy ones. Can’t wait to see what happens next.
7/27 c58 CorinaJayden1
Really enjoying your take on this case and all the references weaved together. Really well done.
Really enjoying your take on this case and all the references weaved together. Really well done.
7/25 c59 Guest
The last 2 chapters were great but a little confusing. I may have to rewatch some NCIS episodes to get all the links straight but you have me reading for the duration so looking forward to your next update.
The last 2 chapters were great but a little confusing. I may have to rewatch some NCIS episodes to get all the links straight but you have me reading for the duration so looking forward to your next update.
7/22 c57 AshleyGranger2
Oh no. Things look like they’re going to get interesting. Shannon’s handling the mess pretty well, though, considering.
Oh no. Things look like they’re going to get interesting. Shannon’s handling the mess pretty well, though, considering.
7/22 c57 Guest
I remember how this got resolved in the show, BUT this time he has Shannon & Kelly to worry about and if the bullet is gone, Abbey has nothing to test? I have been enjoying this story of Gibbs WITH Shannon & Kelly alive but time for the Reynosa cartel to go to jail.
I remember how this got resolved in the show, BUT this time he has Shannon & Kelly to worry about and if the bullet is gone, Abbey has nothing to test? I have been enjoying this story of Gibbs WITH Shannon & Kelly alive but time for the Reynosa cartel to go to jail.
7/14 c56 Guest
Another chapter that moved the story along AND gave us some interaction between Gibbs and Shannon. The actress that played her mom did a good job of acting like the bitch you describe in this chapter.
Another chapter that moved the story along AND gave us some interaction between Gibbs and Shannon. The actress that played her mom did a good job of acting like the bitch you describe in this chapter.
6/27 c55 Guest
So glad that Kelly is ok! Hopefully the Fernández situation gets resolved sooner rather than later.
So glad that Kelly is ok! Hopefully the Fernández situation gets resolved sooner rather than later.