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6/8 c15 Guest
I just want to thank you for existing and writing such a freaking fantastic story! I could see it (and hear it) all as it happened! You captured the voice and feel of the games just perfectly. To the point that was Nate was pinned under the water by Akim I was thinking “just press triangle and get out of it!”
Your attention to detail and the way you wove in historic facts along with “authentic” facts to the story just made it so perfect.
5/12 c15 115ChibiDawn23
I would love it if you just wrote an entire story of Sully making wisecracks at Nate :D

This one's on the favorite list. Can't wait to see where you go next!
5/11 c14 ChibiDawn23
*applause* Awesome job on that final boss battle lol :)
5/9 c13 ChibiDawn23
Ah, yet another villain who picks and chooses the verses that work for him ;) Gotta live those villain monologues! My only thought when they were running from Arwe was "oy, crash cam running!" Something I am terrible at. You write this so well it really is just like playing the game.
Looking forward to more :)
5/2 c12 ChibiDawn23
In typical final boss fashion, we get the monologue, and the butt kicking :) loved it. But also, Arwe is creepy. In a good way.
4/30 c11 ChibiDawn23
I just love reading your Sully. It's the best :)
4/23 c10 ChibiDawn23
Well it's nice to see these two have kissed and made up :) And it sounds like we're building to a finale (final boss level?)! Looking forward to more.
4/19 c9 ChibiDawn23
Lots of good one liners in this one. The sunglasses at night one was great. The action scenes are so intense. I would totally play this. It's like a cross between Uncharted and Mission: Impossible.
4/18 c8 ChibiDawn23
That's not an ominous ending at all...

Really enjoyed all of Nate's talking to himself especially the two one liners he had.
4/9 c7 ChibiDawn23
Loved the cutscene heart to heart with Molly and Sully :)
4/2 c6 ChibiDawn23
I love all the action being thrown in here! And even with the back and forth banner, it's so obvious that Sully and Nate look out for each other and have that bond. You write them really well!
Looking forward to more!
3/25 c5 ChibiDawn23
So many Uncharted 4 vibes :) "bloody pirates!" except Cook wasn't a pirate but y'know...I love how Hassan is just so calculating and calm with everything.
3/16 c4 ChibiDawn23
Props for using my favorite Nathan Drake line ;)
Also, Molly drives like me when I play :P can't say I blame Nate for wanting to drive!
3/12 c3 ChibiDawn23
Cutscene over and... Game on! :)
3/12 c2 ChibiDawn23
Am I supposed to like this Lee Turner? Cuz I don't know if I like him :) he seems shady haha.
Also, what symbol would go on a Drake Signal? :)
On to chapter 3!
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