4/14 c1 4infoplayerstart
Was the ending monologue of chapter 1 a reference to Entropy Zero?
If so then let me tell you, kind sir, you have excellent taste...
Was the ending monologue of chapter 1 a reference to Entropy Zero?
If so then let me tell you, kind sir, you have excellent taste...
3/13 c3 Guest
This comes across as being really, really angsty, for no good reason. Angst in itself is not necessarily bad, but a) it needs a reason to be there - and b) for the character to not wallow in it.
This comes across as being really, really angsty, for no good reason. Angst in itself is not necessarily bad, but a) it needs a reason to be there - and b) for the character to not wallow in it.