3/7 c1 Guest
Always such a treat to see another one shot from you, and you just write Ruth and Harry with such a natural flow, capturing the push and pull between them perfectly ! Bravo
Always such a treat to see another one shot from you, and you just write Ruth and Harry with such a natural flow, capturing the push and pull between them perfectly ! Bravo
3/7 c1 Gregoriana
You have condensed so much into this one shot. Loved the sentence "Now he is a mess of bubbling, eddying emotions..." Lets hope Ruth's clarity of thought continues so H&R can spend many more days in the sunshine Thanks for writing.
You have condensed so much into this one shot. Loved the sentence "Now he is a mess of bubbling, eddying emotions..." Lets hope Ruth's clarity of thought continues so H&R can spend many more days in the sunshine Thanks for writing.
3/6 c1 Guest
Thank you for another story that captures the essence of R/H.
Thank you for another story that captures the essence of R/H.
3/6 c1 Eggwhisker
Always a pleasure to read one of your fics. This one had real momentum to it. I really enjoyed it. I’m going back to read again, thanks so much for sharing.
Always a pleasure to read one of your fics. This one had real momentum to it. I really enjoyed it. I’m going back to read again, thanks so much for sharing.
3/6 c1 3wolfdrum
The way that Ruth 'went off' on Harry while on the roof, one would definitely get the impression that, as Ruth later reflects, "...that this time she cannot forgive Harry." Even Harry thought that might be the case.
Great dialogue...check.
Just enough drama to allow primary characters to tell truth to each other...check.
Inner wrestling: 'do I trust him/her' to make the correct decisions?...check
Thoroughly satisfying one-shot...check!
The way that Ruth 'went off' on Harry while on the roof, one would definitely get the impression that, as Ruth later reflects, "...that this time she cannot forgive Harry." Even Harry thought that might be the case.
Great dialogue...check.
Just enough drama to allow primary characters to tell truth to each other...check.
Inner wrestling: 'do I trust him/her' to make the correct decisions?...check
Thoroughly satisfying one-shot...check!