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7/5 c5 Uroten
That was a really sweet story, well done man, i expected more chapter but this final was really good and enough to close the story.
7/4 c5 Temporal King
I hope you write more for this pair, you did it extremely well and there is more potential here. Heck I would love to see Dexter introduce his new girlfriend, see how their relationship evolves, how Lee Lee gives Dexter courage to show his parents his lab and maybe even a wedding many years in the future.

Also yes I did suggest involving Mandark but I didn’t mean for this story, just something else for a future story if you decide to continue to write for this pairing. I feel forcing Mandark into this particular story would’ve ruined it so I gave you suggestions and ideas for future stories, honestly this slice of life thing was amazing and the characters were so great, believable and respectable of their personalities.

For as short as this story was, it was extremely effective. Please write more for this pair, I would love to see how you would evolve this it’s that good. Thank you for to writing and I hope you come back with another masterpiece even if it is short.

Take care :)
7/4 c5 50acosta perez jose ramiro
Very nice ending here.

Keep the good writing.
7/4 c2 Uroten
Really good interaction between Lee Lee and Dexter, it's the beginning of a good relationship.
Good chapter man.
7/4 c1 Uroten
REally good chapter, well done.
7/4 c5 3RonaldM40196867
That was quite the experience.
7/4 c5 looneytyne22
This was so adorable! I also do like that small bit of crapping on Dee Dee at the end. I can't stand her.
6/17 c4 Temporal King
Ok...this is cute, very adorable and wholesome. Honestly the chemistry (no pun intended) is just spot on for these 2, you even captured the shows comedic tone well but it feels like your evolving the characters and maturing them, even the parents personalities were spot on.

When you focus on Dexter and Lee Lee it feels like they are able to bring out the best of each other yet help them with what they lack, like 2 halves of a greater whole. Lee Lee is able to express her love for academics with Dexter while Dexter is being mellowed out, trying new things and even putting effort into understand girly things or even trying it, it was a nice touch to show Dexter really cared and so does Lee Lee, she is able to bring the best out of him in the best way.

Even talking to Dexter about the inevitability of revealing his lab but doing so in a way that makes sense, it feels like Dexter really took her words to heart but was able to get back to her which I’m not gonna lie is very big of him to do, young as he is he already understands the date is about your date and I have the feeling Dexter was the one to ask.

This romance is handled in a believable and respectable way that still capture the characters personality and yet at the same time matures them. How did you do that? Seriously a few times I briefly asked if this was Lee Lee and Dexter.

One thing I would like to see is maybe Mandark going to far and targeting her, like maybe he is spying on them getting closer and tries to hurt Lee Lee to hurt Dexter which he does but let’s just say it was a button Mandark shouldn’t of pushed. Not only with Dexter but with Dee Dee as well for,after Dexter is done with him Dee Dee had a turn, lets just say nothing remained of his lab after that.

I feel that would make a good confession, not the over dramatic stuff we see in the show but Dexter genuinely angry at Mandark, worried and scared for Lee Lee to the point of actual tears and a feeling Dexter knows he cannot deny or hide anymore. In fact confessing to Lee Lee could be the catylist to letting Decter open up to his lab to his parents.

Maybe through Lee Lee Dexter I’d able to forge a better relationship with his sister or even bond with her in a way they both can have fun with that dosent involve destroying his lab. I’ve always felt that if Dexter behaved more like a kid and toned down the genius reasonably his relationship with Dee Dee would be way stronger and she would be more inclined to listen.

Heck seeing Dexter wait in a hospital and silently sitting waiting for Lee Lee to awake from injuries Mandark inflicted upon her, just silent tears as he waits, it’s a time we’re Dee Dee could be a friend and a sister.

There is a lot here I enjoy and I hope to see more of this. My only real critique is that it isn’t long enough, I mean all 4 of these chapter could’ve been chapter one in my opinion. But other than that you got yourself a good one, I’m impressed. Keep up,the excellent work, I want to see more of how these 2 will grow.
6/9 c4 8The Keeper of Worlds
Damn, that last line by Dexter was smooth Persian silk!
6/6 c4 50acosta perez jose ramiro
Nice one here, and yeah, unlike, let's say, Jimmy Neutron's parents, Dexter's parents always react negatively whenever they find out about Dexter's lab. Again, the problem might be that Dexter has kept the lab a secret since the beginning, so it's not the lab what they resent but the secrecy.

Keep the good writing.
6/6 c4 3RonaldM40196867
At least things are going well.
6/6 c3 RamForJesus
This is getting good! You have a great way of making the characters come to life and be very realistic.
I have been reading through quite a few of your stories and have quite enjoyed them.
I look forward to the date between Dexter and Lee Lee.
Thank you for bringing a smile to my day.
3/20 c3 8The Keeper of Worlds
A nice rolling start and build I am seeing here.
3/19 c3 50acosta perez jose ramiro
Very nice one here, and yeah, I can see Dexter being a fan of a Twilight Sparkle-like pony.

Keep the good writing.
3/19 c3 26The J.A.M. a.k.a. Numbuh i
Heh, I thought his mom was going to say, "Dexter's off to a convention!" :D :D :D
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