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7/22 c17 Nellie9
Yes! I'm so happy he told her, it felt like it was never going to happen but it did! I definitely think the teacher is going to find out, or Tris's parents. Regardless, I'm thrilled and can't wait for the next chapter.
7/20 c17 expat24
Gosh I am SO pleased he shared his secret with Tris, she is his everything ! She deserved to know the truth about his horrific abusive home life. I so hope they can find a safe solution '' somehow'' together or with outside help such as Ms Reyes perhaps ? (Where is the famous Amar help in this story?)
Surely anything Tobias may say would/could stay confidential until such time they have a safety net in place for him although at being almost 18 it may help?
Tris is sadly right, going to college may not solve much...My heart breaks for him - Thanks.
7/19 c17 5Sensitivity8
Small step but I'm glad he told Tris.
7/19 c17 Guest
Wow , I love this chapter can't wait for the next one , I just love this story , you are amazing.
If you guys are looking for a good alternative Allegiant ending , I will highly recommend the Chasm by xtrisandfourx also, its following by The Pit and the last one of the trilogy the Pyre , all of them written by the same writer. This story is beyond amazing with and incredible ending, you want to forget Veronica's evil endings go and read this trilogy.
7/19 c17 enj412
I am glad he told Tris, but I don't know how she'll be able to keep it to herself. This situation is just awful. Tobias deserves a much better life. I hope the counselor did her duty and reported it. But I worry about what will happen. He is not 18 yet. Thanks for updating this wonderful story. I look forward to reading all the chapters to come.
7/19 c17 20GODESTof3WORLDS
He told her! This one had a lot of emotion in it and you wrote it perfectly! Good for Tris for not giving up on Tobias. This was an amazing chapter, bittersweet, and I am excited to see what happens next! Hope you had a marvelous weekend too.
7/9 c16 Eunicejj
This is amazinggggy. I love the divergent series sm! i’ve recently been trying to find some good fan fiction to get my mind off of the “We Can be Mended” storyline LMAO. This is perfect! It’s 7:17 am and i’ve been reading since 1am, im so intrigued! Keep up the good work :)
7/5 c16 1Initiate101
I’m frustrated Tobias won’t say anything but I understand why he’s keeping it in. I really hope he at least tells Tris. I’m wondering if she say something after he turns 18 so he won’t have to be put in the system.
7/5 c16 20GODESTof3WORLDS
Yay! Happy late 4th of July! This was an amazing chapter with Tobias trying to cover his eye with makeup, Tris worrying over said black eye, and then the counselor... Tobias is having a rough week. Great writing and I am excited to see what happens next! Hopefully Tris tries to find out what happens
7/5 c16 Nellie9
I didn't start reading this fan fiction until chapter 15 was out and then I was on the edge of my seat waiting for what would happen next. I quite nearly jumped when I saw there was an update. There are hardly words for how much I love this and I think you are a wonderful author. Thank you so much for this amazing story, I look forward to the next chapter.
7/5 c16 M35
Thank you so much for the update. I’m trilled

Hope Tobias opens up to tris about his eye and waiting for more
7/5 c16 BumbleBee19
Really
7/5 c16 27cjgwilliams
Oh yeah Johanna totally knows what's up. I knew it when Marcus hit him. There's no way anyone will believe him because Tobias didn't have the bruise when he left soccer practice and the coach knew it. God, Marcus is an idiot. I hope he gets arrested, the jerk.
7/5 c16 lexinthecity
I have a feeling neither Tris or Ms. Reyes are going to drop this issue. He already knows Tris is only placating him because they're in school. He's a smart kid. Too smart to not realize that Ms. Reyes definitely doesn't believe him. His hesitation alone was answer enough. The question is what happens once he tells the truth?
7/5 c16 expat24
I am disappointed Tobias could not have been honest about his injury with Tris or the college. Its only a matter of time until the sad abuse truth comes out i hope and finally puts away his shitty father away for good. Home should be a safe heaven and for Tobias its hell, my heart breaks. By revealing the truth he could get help so come on Tobias stop protecting this scumbag and get the help you deserve. Its a great shame Cara is protecting his secret but its not up to her to tell after all. I hope things will improve for Tobias, he so deserves it and Tris also has the right to know. Good chapter.
Ps: cant Marcus catch covid and stay in hospital for months on end ? That would help...
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