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8/1 c11 41Breaking-Benjamin-rules
I’ve been super busy so only now am I able to read the chapter, but it was well worth the wait! It’s exciting to see the three generations coming together for one purpose! And I love the growth of Ren and Goro ofc. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
7/29 c11 1A Stoopid Person
RyojiMochi
i approve of Futaba's nickname for Ryoji- skskskskksksks
7/25 c11 Aeon Nova
I'm late. But whatever. I just couldn't find anything good to read on this site so i started binging other novels while preparing my cover. So yeah, I wasn't looking for new stuff here for a long while now.

Anyway, back on topic. By this point, i would really recommend having a proofreader now if you cant proofread your work yourself. But, meh, you do you.

Also, good to see we're finally progressing with the task "LOOKING FOR MAKOTO." Been great so far. I just skip through all those romance scenes honestly, since i see no point in reading it. But yeah, dont mind that part. I think there are people who likes reading that kind of stuff. It just doesn't sound right to me when it was unneeded per se.
6/26 c10 A Stoopid Person
Ryoji's done with Maruki's shit- He wants door-kun back right now.
renren has a gae panic when pancake boi is being cute, i approve.

hope your doing good! can't wait for the next chapter!

i wanna see Thanatos commit obliterate by Door of Hades-
6/26 c10 41Breaking-Benjamin-rules
My heart always hurts for poor Sumire. This was an awesome chapter, though, and I loved the interactions between Maruki and Ryoji a lot. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
6/15 c9 Guest
Thank you for your explanation and I fully understand what you mean I wasn't saying it's a bad idea I just thought at least one person in SEES remembering everything if the changes in the world will be around for a while could be a good thing for the thieves in getting all kinds of information from the Shadow Ops. And this was a great chapter very informative.
6/12 c9 1A Stoopid Person
*kicks door to story comments in* YES! CRAZY PANCAKE BOI IS BEING A CHILL BOI! Renren will commit Eren Jaeger mentality but without the crazy German boi energy! Ryoji is giving off some good vibes at the end- yes i love this-

i hope your doing good! i look forward to the next update!
6/12 c9 41Breaking-Benjamin-rules
Toootally didn’t forget to catch up on reading this, nope.
I’m sincerely loving the dynamic between Ren and Goro in this story, and it’s interesting to see how Ryoji impacts or doesnt impact the original story. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
6/10 c8 Guest
I found this story sometime ago and loved and still do however I can't imagine Aigis not remembering Makoto even by divine intervention Ryoji I'd understand since he was part of the dark hour but she still remembered their journey after Nyx was sealed before graduation while no one else did she defied a god then so she should now but if they still remember then they are good at acting to fool Ren anyway I hope you update again soon
5/29 c8 Mangareader13
Maruki time.
5/30 c8 2DangerousFox682
uh oh
5/27 c7 1A Stoopid Person
RYOJI GETS SOME ATTENTION!
i hope this gets updated soon oml its so coool
5/19 c7 Mangareader13
Shinji is alive! :D

Tears and fuzziness in spades.
5/16 c7 41Breaking-Benjamin-rules
Aww, I like that Makoto’s group is gonna help Ren get out of jail! I got super excited at the inclusion of Shinjiro! He was always one of my favorites outside of Aigis and Koromaru. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
5/15 c7 Aeon Nova
Ok, so this is where the true fun starts i see... But anyhow, i have a different reason for leaving a comment this time. Going straight to the point here. I kind of noticed that i keep changing a few words while reading this. So that probably means you don't have anyone to proofread and edit this, or the time to do it yourself. Nothing major like problem that needs my full attention. It was simply just wrong use of words for now. This is here to say that let's not let the errors give a different meaning in the future.

...So yeah, uh... Dont put me up as a proofreader. I dont want to spoil myself you see...
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