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8/1 c23 34JOMOCrazyKid
Both new chapters were amazing to read. I loved how you dove deeper into both Imelda and Héctor's families throughout. And brought them together at the end of this chapter. How cute!

I'm loving this story so far. I look forward to more. Especially more chapters where Héctor and Imelda are hanging out together like they're supposed to.

Héctor is a WAY better husband than Ernesto could ever be. It sucks that Imelda was forced to marry him before Héctor.

Keep this story up. I'll definitely be looking for more chapters after this one.
7/13 c7 67ainmals1
Nice chapter.

I'll take my time reading the rest.

Imelda and Hector are getting closer. I like it.
7/13 c21 34JOMOCrazyKid
You must've been busy. Wow! From six to 21 chapters in less than a day. I love them all, by the way, and this chapters was a nice ending(?) to your fanfic. Got any future updates, because if so, I'm in edge. This story is a nice twist on the movie. At least Imelda never stayed married to Ernesto when the movie takes place. Just thinking of it makes me sick. Again I look forward to more chapters(?) This is (was?) a good and intriguing fanfic to read.
6/10 c6 67ainmals1
Wow, even as a married couple Ernesto doesn't treat Imelda very well.

Out of Ernesto's friends Antonio is a lot more reasonable, and I can see that Gustavo is friends with him and agrees with that big jerk.

Cheechron and Juanita being like family to Hector? I'm glad you did that, it's pretty cool.

Yay, Hector and Imelda have met. And I know that he will treat her right.
6/10 c6 34JOMOCrazyKid
Interesting. Ernesto and Imelda before Imelda and Héctor... wow. That's just... crazy. I loved reading this, it's a very intriguing story. I'm so glad Coco wasn't born to Ernesto as her father in the movie. That would be terrible.
4/16 c5 182Luiz4200
A happy one? I presume she'll finally meet Hector.
4/16 c5 67ainmals1
Wow. Thanks for the warning though.

I wasn't expecting Ernesto and Imelda were married. But it was in force not willing.

Poor Imelda. First she had to marry a man she didn't love, then she had miscarriage, and the poor baby died shortly after birth.

I'm glad next chapter will be happy.
3/25 c3 coconutty1122
the concept of this fic sounds cool. going to be interesting to see how this au plays out (especially with imelda having been married to ernesto!)
3/9 c3 182Luiz4200
Imelda and Ernesto? What a twist. Is he Coco's father?
2/27 c1 Guest
Ooh! I wonder how much harder it’ll be for Miguel to follow music if even HECTOR doesn’t like it. Wonder what must’ve happened and look forward to any future updates :)
2/18 c1 67ainmals1
Interesting take on the movie. I don't think anyone has ever done something like it.

Looking forward to see what happens next.

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