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7/27 c41 pocksuppet
I'm yet another reader who was all "No Jiberty? Boo!" but now it looks like you're including my fave crack ship of Jimmy/Liberty, so I'm stoked. Nobody ever writes about them, so this is awesome! I love how she checks his ego at the door and it's interesting to see how different he turned out since he was never shot.
7/27 c41 AllieB0524
Emma broke my heart. I’m so sad for them.
7/21 c39 Guest
Your Ashley is so much more likeable than canon Ashley lol.

Now that Manny and JT are a thing, I hope that you won't fall into the tired and often racist "strong black woman who don't need no man" trope and pair Liberty with somebody who is actually worthy of being with her (plz not Derek), since JT is off the table for sure now. Is Jimmy single?
7/21 c39 AllieB0524
Yay! The baby is coming!
7/18 c38 Guest
Seeing Manny taking Liberty's original role in the tutoring scene stings, not gonna lie. But at the same time, Craig is trash. I'm conflicted lol.
6/30 c32 3I Hate Fanon
I'm just happy that Toby is finally getting some action. Hopefully you'll find a hot guy to pair Liberty with soon, since Jiberty obviously isn't happening. I have made peace with that lol.
6/27 c31 AllieB0524
Aww I loved the Sean and Liberty part
6/24 c30 Guest
I just wanted to say that I appreciate that you changed the previous chapter. I don't think that you were intentionally being racist, but I tend to side eye certain things that this fandom does when it comes to the black female characters.
6/21 c29 Guest
I kind of have issues with your description of Liberty as Willow. I don't know if you chose to single her out as a "very alternate version of Willow" because she's black or because you think that she's less attractive than Willow, but I don't care for it at all. This fandom has always been super racist against the black female characters (especially Liberty, because she dated the white golden boy of the fandom) and you didn't single Jimmy out as Giles despite being black or Paige, who is nowhere near as attractive as Cordelia , so I hope you can understand why I raised my eyebrows at this.
6/18 c28 8cosmotarian
Thank you for giving Hazel a plotline that explores her family and culture and doesn't make her a token sidekick!
6/12 c26 Guest
I know it sounds terrible, but I'm thrilled about JT and Paige breaking up, because that leaves him free for Liberty. And maybe now my girl will finally get some screentime in this fic!

I like how you're giving characters such as Danny and Chantay time to shine. The show failed them in that regard.
6/3 c23 Guest
You've already developed Chantay more than the show's actual writers have, which is... sad on their part.

The one bright spot about JT and Liberty not being together is that we probably won't have to suffer through JT/Mia, since he only dated her to try to replicate what he could have had with Liberty lol.
5/31 c22 Guest
I’ve read all 22 chapters in one day and I’m loving this so far! Keep it coming!
5/29 c21 AllieB0524
Peter is and always will be gross. Sorry. I hate him lol
5/23 c19 Guest
I think that Toby and Liberty would have made a terrible couple (Liberty needs somebody laid back and I love Liberty, but she would have steamrolled Toby) and I always felt that it was an extremely lazy ship (people only throw them together I'm fanfic because they're nerdy) but your other explanations for how things would have gone are interesting. The only other one I disagree with is JT/Paige, because JT clearly had latent feelings for Liberty in Season 3, seeing as how he was having wet dreams about her.

Your Darcy as a fish out of water is a great choice. It's not at all out of character.
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