7/17 c23 Honourable
Nice to see Lestrade learning something from Sherlock's methods! And nice to see Sherlock outwitting Dr. Strange. Looking forward to the resolution of it being Moriarty's phone.
Nice to see Lestrade learning something from Sherlock's methods! And nice to see Sherlock outwitting Dr. Strange. Looking forward to the resolution of it being Moriarty's phone.
7/16 c23 Champagne42
The thrill ride continues! The suspense, plot changes are amazing! No wonder I'm hooked on this story.
The thrill ride continues! The suspense, plot changes are amazing! No wonder I'm hooked on this story.
7/9 c21 Honourable
Moving along nicely, with some spot-on exchanges between John and Sherlock! Looking forward to more twists-and-turns in the story.
Moving along nicely, with some spot-on exchanges between John and Sherlock! Looking forward to more twists-and-turns in the story.
7/5 c20 92LawDog
There's a curveball/plot twist that I didn't expect!
A daughter! Very delicate situation here.
There's a curveball/plot twist that I didn't expect!
A daughter! Very delicate situation here.
6/22 c19 Honourable
What a fabulous chapter! I am eager to see how this gets resolved and who gets their deserved pay-back.
What a fabulous chapter! I am eager to see how this gets resolved and who gets their deserved pay-back.
6/4 c18 Honourable
What an interesting plot twist! And what a wonderful change in your formatting-so much easier to read! Congratulations.
What an interesting plot twist! And what a wonderful change in your formatting-so much easier to read! Congratulations.
5/26 c16 2LawDog
What a turn of events! So much unexpected activity. Euros is frighteningly clever at doing damage, isn't she?
What a turn of events! So much unexpected activity. Euros is frighteningly clever at doing damage, isn't she?
5/21 c15 2SherlockContinues
Dear 2LawDog, thanks for the kind review.
You are right: every mistake you found, is a writing mistake. That's the problem with being a German writer, with a German PC, who corrects my English writing in the wrong way. So, so sorry for that. I am always reading the chapter 3 times, before I publish it. Well, as we now can see: I am not perfect, but I am sure you knew, what I really wanted to write. I was very happy, that at least someone is liking this story. It's not easy to please "Sherlockians" ;-)
I will try to correct the mistakes as soon as possible. Help is always appreciated.
Best wishes Debby
Dear 2LawDog, thanks for the kind review.
You are right: every mistake you found, is a writing mistake. That's the problem with being a German writer, with a German PC, who corrects my English writing in the wrong way. So, so sorry for that. I am always reading the chapter 3 times, before I publish it. Well, as we now can see: I am not perfect, but I am sure you knew, what I really wanted to write. I was very happy, that at least someone is liking this story. It's not easy to please "Sherlockians" ;-)
I will try to correct the mistakes as soon as possible. Help is always appreciated.
Best wishes Debby
5/21 c15 92LawDog
I'm really enjoying this chapter! It's refreshing to see Mycroft genuinely concerned, empathetic towards others and their welfare.
Just a few editorial comments: in reference to Mycroft's fingers, breaks instead of brakes
in reference to mercy instead of merci
in reference to Mycroft's query "Were we in time?" instead of Where
I'm not a troll, honest! As a fellow writer, I wanted to point out some details. It's easy to miss things as writers get so caught up in writing the stories.
I'm really enjoying this chapter! It's refreshing to see Mycroft genuinely concerned, empathetic towards others and their welfare.
Just a few editorial comments: in reference to Mycroft's fingers, breaks instead of brakes
in reference to mercy instead of merci
in reference to Mycroft's query "Were we in time?" instead of Where
I'm not a troll, honest! As a fellow writer, I wanted to point out some details. It's easy to miss things as writers get so caught up in writing the stories.
4/8 c1 Kaizer1008
This really helped me to lessen my stress! what a great story, thank you for writing this” If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to hardy novelstar. top or joye novelstar. top
This really helped me to lessen my stress! what a great story, thank you for writing this” If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to hardy novelstar. top or joye novelstar. top