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9/2 c11 Guest
Another great, but brutal chapter. Found several errors, will mention them in AO3.

Ethan & A'sao starting to get little acquainted with each other which is good for our main characters. And the campsite of the Bad Bloods, excellent description especially the tents. As for Ethan seeing what he and the Females are dealing with, he's starting to see why the Females are hunting the Bad Bloods, including the Leader Na'tou-Va! And seeing Grace & Price alive, though not long for Price, Ethan is definitely a man fighting for what's right even though it's suicide. Poor Grace, getting raped by Bhuh'kah is sad for her. What's Ethan going to do now? Stupidity or Heroic?
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Now for more Respect Sequel chapter(s) to write.
Ch. 41: after killing the group that held his family and tried to take Tiger away, Ethan comforts his parents knowing they are alive and well. He praises his father and his military training & comforts his mother that she's save. Tiger & Ethan's Sister arrive to join in. Both Ethan's Team & his family earned a small victory. But then, laughing is heard around them. The same evil laugh the Team are familiar with. The Bad Blood! Then the voice of the Bad Blood is heard throughout the cabin/forest. "I admit, I enjoyed watching you kill those pathetic oomans and saving the others. Very admirable. But that isn't the End of this Hunt." As Ethan and Team/Family wonder where the Bad Blood is, they see shadowy figures surrounding them and the cabin. Even the familiar hissing/screeching noises Ethan is well familiar... Xenomorphs! Seeing over a couple of dozen of the serpents surrounding them, everyone prepared themselves for another fight. Then, the door to the front of the cabin opens and out comes the very Bad Blood the Team was hunting. The Bad Blood, unmasked, walks slowly to the surrounded group and enjoys their fear/concern/anxiety of what is going to happen next. The Bad Blood then continue his talking, "you ooman (reference to Ethan) really have my full attention. You lead an Yautja Hunting Party and survived my pets without any hesitation. You will make a perfect trophy." Ethan responds back, "not happening a**hole! You caused so much pain & suffering to lots of innocent lives. Justice will be served!" The Bad Blood laughs that off by responding back, "not this time motherf***er! You and the 3 Clans will fail and your family will die a horrible death." Ethan not liking that, aims his handmade weapon at the Bad Blood and tells him, "my family are not going to become hosts to your beasts!" The Bad Blood replies back, "then let's finish this. After you are all dead, your skulls will be mine!" The Bad Blood rises his right hand and snaps his fingers to order his Xenomorphs to attack. Ethan, A'sao, the Team & his family prepared for the final battle.
That ends that chapter. You add anything you want to that chapter.

And now, rest well. Continue the Hunt, work hard, collect more trophies and MORE BLOODSHED PLEASE! *laughing evilly*
8/6 c10 Mariah
wow ethan save A'sao now to help them fight.
8/4 c10 1NeverNeverLady
Oh dear, what kind of sh*tshow has poor Ethan found himself in? A'sao seems like him though and the feeling seems to be about to become mutual. Hope your new job isn't going too badly, you'll get used to it. After all, it wouldn't have been offered, if they didn't think you could do it. x
8/4 c10 Guest
Please make a happy ending. Make a'sao and ethan stay alive forever and together, become mates and have children please
8/4 c10 Anonymous-E
AWESOME CHAPTER! The fighting between our characters & those mantis-like creatures was the best to read and imagine. Still imagining now. Ethan showed his Warrior status to the females and even impressed A'sao & Vi'su! Nai'stip, as always, a BITCH! Can't wait for the next chapter(s) and see what's next!

Now for the Sequel chapter!
Ch. 40: after the Yautja team unleash their roars, the mysterious group began to show fear that more of them started dropping dead. Ethan's team and the Recruits begin killing the troops left & right in many different ways. As Ethan saved his family from their captors, his father joins the fight using one of the dead troops' rifle and killing any of them. Even Ethan is amazed of his father, "once a soldier, always a soldier." But during the carnage, the Sister's ex decided to take her and flee the scene. Even Ethan's mother couldn't stop it. Ethan's POV, realizing what's happening, Ethan thought about saving his sister, but decided to save Tiger instead (there's a reason here). As he arrived in the trunk (like a ambulance) that had Tiger's unconscious body, after killing a couple of guards of course, Ethan search inside the trunk to wake up Tiger and finds a bottle of adrenaline and a syringe. After getting the right amount, Ethan prepares to wake his brother-in-arms, "Time to wake up big guy!." After plunging the needle in Tiger's chest with the adrenaline, a few seconds later, Tiger wakes up breaks free of his bonds and charging, while Ethan gets out of the way, into 2 troops and starts ripping them apart like a beast. Ethan watching this felt like Tiger needed to take his anger out on someone. As Tiger turned towards Ethan, he asked where's the sister is, with Ethan pointing to the right direction she was taking to. Tiger gives chase to save the sister. As Ethan & the Team finish killing these unwanted guests, including the Leader of this group, he joins his parents while his Team kill off any surviving troops. Scene change, as the Sister & her Ex flee, the Sister demanded to be let go. But the Ex refuse because they are leaving together and will not let her off his sights. But here, she tells him that she has made a choice and has already committed to it. At first the Ex doesn't believe her. But she explains further that she made love to Tiger and is not ashamed of it. Not happy of what he's hearing, the Ex slaps her hard, calling her every name in the book for what she did. Then out of nowhere, two serrated blades pierce thru and lifts him in air. The Ex turns his head to see the angry look of Tiger. Tiger inches his face to the Ex's and says, "I WARN YOU!" before Tiger grabs his neck and rips his head off while roaring in victory! After disposing the body, he sees the Sister on the ground and joins to comfort her which she tears up seeing him again. He tells her he loves her more than anything and she returns the same way with kissing each other. To end this chapter, Ethan sees one survivor and learns from him that the Group they were dealing with is a group we all know and love/hate (a familiar name). After that, Ethan orders Swift Death to rip the spine & skull of the survivor to avoid any future trouble.
That's it for now.

Thank you so much and AWESOME TATTOO you got! Congrats GREAT HUNTRESS!
7/10 c9 NeverNeverLady
Just caught up - pretty good! Have to sympathise with poor Ethan though as well as A'sao.
7/6 c9 Mariah
yikes ethan save A'sao but now the bad bloods have arrived now time for a fight.
7/5 c9 Guest
Please make a happy ending. Make a'sao and ethan stay alive forever and together, become mates and have children please
7/5 c9 Mendoza249
Ethan is taking the saying "I rather die on my feet than submit" to the core in this chapter. Anyway, it was a fun read and I'm excited how Ethan while survive the hostile planet and his enemies/allies huntresses.
7/4 c9 4predator1701
Nai'stip was bordering on breaking the code herself. Seems like her life was made to be as ruthless as possible bordering on badblood behavior but not quite.

As for Ethan, not gonna lie the man is finally growing a pair and is now showing feelings toward A'sao. If nothing else then for the fact she has spared his life and defended it with a zest. What I find ironic is so far the Code hasn't been broken by either.

Then again the man can't tell the difference between Yautja criminals an not, thus the shy Vi'su would be helpful in that regard.

As for the hissing, it can't be xenomorphs as badbloods aren't that stupid and if they are, well then this planet is screwed.

Looking forward to more, thank you and stay healthy.
7/4 c9 Anonymous-E
Alright! Finally on FanFiction! Your beloved audiences will thank you NONSTOP!

Hunt, Trophy, More Chapters, Repeat! Happy Birthday Again!
6/9 c8 predator1701
A'sao forgot a few aspects of the honor code she could have used. Simply put, she found Ethan first and by edict Predators are not to interfere with one on one duels. Granted given the situation that is a bit of a stretch but not out of the question.

The other three she could have used is she deems him worthy of the mark but the final one is a bit iffy. Since Predators don't believe in slavery, she could claim him as a mate or lifemate. Again saving his life but getting ridiculed but hey it's legal. Then there is the fact he is deemed worthy and thus not worth killing, granted by edict this means he deserves a gift but since he hasn't done anything but survive that rule wouldn't apply.

Now using him as bait, sounds disgraceful and borderline slave. Meaning he is going to have to agree to it. In short they are really skirting the code here but hey, I'm sure Ethan will fall in love with A'sao in no time.

Thank you and stay healthy.
6/9 c8 Mariah
yikes as'ao saved ethan but now she is being whipped.

hope ethan agrees to help them and maybe live with them?
6/9 c8 Guest
will also nai'stip and vi'su fell in love with 2 humans? Please tell me yes
6/9 c8 Guest
Please make a happy ending. Make a'sao and ethan stay alive forever and together, become mates and have children please
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