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8/4 c5 2i am cloud
Bea is literally the "This is fine!" meme, and that is so not fair.

The part where Claudia doesn't tell Noah why Bea's exhausted broke my heart. I know she probably doesn't remember what happened, but I also wouldn't be surprised if she lied to cover her ass so they didn't get into a fight/had to confess that her memory is getting worse.

And Tyler being the one who came up with the idea to forge her mom's signature! That's one of the nicest things he could do for Bea. I like that he now considers her part of their group, despite the two of them initially not getting along in the previous chapter. It's nice to see them be friends. She deserves to have a couple of people she can depend on.
8/3 c4 i am cloud
I love Papa Hale so much. He's so cool; the kind of guy who's punny and does stupid dad shit that you appreciate when you're older. I'd totally hang out with him. (I'm not gonna lie, it makes me laugh knowing that Peter has to deal with him because he’s married to Talia. Like, “Great. Of all the guys in the world, my sister had to choose this dork?”)

Claudia being aware that something's wrong with her and trying not to let Bea know made my heart hurt. That poor woman, having her brain work against her. It makes me wonder how long she goes before Noah takes her to the doctors. I imagine that Bea's interference pushes her mom’s diagnosis further down the canon timeline.

And you're welcome! Paramnesia and Two Can Keep A Secret are wonderfully written. It feels like I'm reading published books for Teen Wolf that dive deeper into the show's lore/characters' backstories.
7/13 c3 i am cloud
I know I say this a lot, but the beginning of this chapter was heart-breaking. I was worried that Claudia would say or do something mean when Bea went to check on her, and that her and Stiles had gone out to run errands but got lost because she couldn't remember the way back home.

Are Bea and Tyler going to become friends, or will they not like each other? I could see either happening, though it would be nice if the three of them become best friends. Oh! If the former happens, is one of the reasons why her and Derek's friendship became strained was because something happened to Tyler? (I'm probably wrong, but it does make me wonder what else you have planned for this fic and Paramnesia.)
7/12 c2 i am cloud
Oh, yeah. I relate to having a first responder dad (expect he was a firefighter instead of a police officer) who worked a lot when I was a kid. It sucked, especially when he was on shift during the holidays.

I don't know if you'll pair Bea and Derek together, but childhood friends to lovers is such a good trope. Even if they don't date, they're definitely soulmates. Seeing the two of them happy is nice, considering everything they go through when they're in high school.
7/12 c1 i am cloud
I love Paramnesia, and I'm in the middle of reading one of its chapters, but I needed a slight break because of how heavy it is. (I know that it's going to eventually become more serious, but at least the first chapter doesn't hit you with angst.) I'm glad that I found this fic. It's so cool that you decided to write a story that focuses on the events before S1, and I like that we get to see how Bea and Derek became friends.

It does make sense that Derek is a bit OOC, as this is set before the events we see happen in the show. He's always been a leader who isn't afraid to take charge, as well as someone who cares so much for his loved ones that he'd do and give anything to make sure they're safe. So, really, you did a great job at keeping him in character.

Poor Bea, getting something that she doesn't really like for her birthday and spending most of it alone. It was really thoughtful of Noah to think she'd like it because of the memories she has of making pizza with her grandma. (He's such a good dad; the best in all of Beacon Hills.) Also, Derek making sure that she has fun on her birthday was really sweet of him.
4/11 c1 Kaizer1008
This really helped me to lessen my stress! what a great story, thank you for writing this” If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to hardy novelstar. top or joye novelstar. top
4/7 c3 Guest
This is the sweetest thing ever!

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