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7/12 c7 4JustDerkT
Glad to see another update! I guess that Russia will still fight on the side of the Allies, but I hope Olga will not make the same mistake as Stalin did in the original timeline.

Again, I look forward to the ultimate confrontation! Keep writing.
6/8 c2 Gabros
Love it!
5/4 c6 JustDerkT
Usually, I would italicize words that characters yell or whisper.

Stiil, this juicy chapter was of better quality and fun to read! The narrative is getting better, and the plot is thickening! I would like to see the Tsarina learn that wars are necessary in some situations. Also, I wonder what the Little Pair will do about WWII.
4/8 c4 JustDerkT
Another interesting chapter! I liked how Dmitri Pavlovich has a funny side to his personality, it is fun watching Olga and Dmitri's banter.

I am interested in seeing how Tsarina Olga will react from the future German betrayal.
4/3 c3 JustDerkT
Ooh, this is getting interesting! Glad to see that you have done your research of history, especially the events leading to WWII. I am wondering who the male consort of Olga is, however.
3/31 c2 JustDerkT
Interesting premise! Feel free to include the Munich agreement meeting, but focus on the main stars of the show such as OTMA and possibly the other characters too.

One tip for your work would be to give some background of how Olga seems to know what is going on. Was she tutored in politics by her late father or taught by a royal relative from 1917 to the 1940s?

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