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8/2 c20 Frisc0
Great story, but I'd prefer Quent to be a little bit more ruthless. In the game of thrones, one cannot be forgiving and weak.
8/1 c20 007rajesh1
Somehow these politics are making me nervous.
7/31 c20 4a guy1013
nice story and any marriage with arriane will fail best to keep her house arrested in some for gone area
7/29 c20 Guest
Good chapter.

Doran and Oberyn must now deal with the fallout of the events of the past few chapters, as well as the information Quentyn revealed.

I like the irony of how Arianne's scheme to officially become heiress of Dorne resulted in her taking her out of the race.

I am surprised Doran didn't simply send Daemon to take the Black and be done with him. Also, since Daemon is Oberyn's former squire I feel like the later should have more of a reaction in regard to the former's crime and punishment.

When discussing a possible betrothal for Arianne, the dismissal of Edmure doesn't make much sense. It is TULLY blood that binds the North, the Riverlands and the Vale together (though the last region is already out thanks to Lysa, not that they can know that). The Riverlands are a far richer than the North, the culture would make life far easier for Arianne than being Lady of Winterfell, which would be a great challenge for her. Not to mention that while the region will become a battleground in any future conflict, well the DO plan to take part in a war against House Lannister and Baratheon. The poor performance of the Riverlands in canon was due to Tywin attacking them before they where ready, Edmure not being super competent in military matters and frankly Martin wanting things to fall a certain way.

Thanks for your good work. Until next time.
7/29 c20 ATP
So,Varys is Blackfyre should knew he could do ? killing Tywin is impossible.
Varys is out of the - maybe kill Littlefinger when he go to one of his brothels ?
7/31 c20 jhsilver123
A lot of people have brought up great arguments as to why Arianne/Rob is a dumb idea, and I have another one. I don't think I saw this one here, but Basically, I doubt she would remain loyal to either Rob or Willas. I get a strong suspicion that she would cheat on both of these men maybe even on purpose just to mess with Doran.

Anyways I'm enjoying your work Thanks for the chapter.
7/28 c20 Katakuri San
Stahp Oberyn, Stahp! Goddamn idiot is going to do it again sigh...But then by the time he does something, Ned will already have done his thing at Kingslanding and get himself killed so yeah. Also Arianne and Robb...You know why not also it WOULD fit as a consequence for Arianne's actions, not that Robb is a bad guy or anything in fact she could do a lot worse but well the North is at the opposite end of the continent from Dorne and the weather, so yeah that would fit as consequences when you put it together with exiling Daemon and taking Dorne from her IF it is made clear to her that she lost all rights to it due to her actions against her brothers and his friend.

Also, Doran is gonna Doran with thinking about getting Quentyn hooked up with Daenerys...Yeah with the memories of Merren I cannot wait how this will go I mean if OG Qunetyn(well the one who died in Mereen)is still in there in some form and I very much like Doran's plan unraveling and man is Oberyn stupid thinking Arianne could still rule Dorne after everything and a hypocrite by blaming the Starks for what they did but eh Oberyn.

Oh and about the serving boy I am pretty sure Quentyn is expecting this, I wonder if he will try to prevent Doran from disappearing said boy or not. Anyway until next time can't wait to see more! Perhaps an Arianne PoV next?
7/29 c20 HalfbloodHeir
Yo i reread this again today and i have been having some doubts like the starting of the 1st chapter its cletus dream right? And he has one somewhere in the middle also where he is being executed for treason and there was something said about a lady and Arianne joining some pretender and stuffs. Is he having green dreams like bran used to have or its just me overthinking. And i hope you can write constantly and upload a bit more as i am dying from curiosity about what to happen next. Thank you for these updates.
7/28 c20 95TMI Fairy
Arianne/Robb?
Now, that's even more stupid than Margaery/Robb ...
Go Team Martel!
"This didn't make sense." - Oberyn had his once a decade lightbulb moment, I see.
Leaving Frog/Danny option is "stupid pie in the sky" territory, but soooo in character for the Martel brothers!
7/28 c20 osterreicher97
Interesting turn of events, though Arianne had it coming somewhat...
7/28 c20 1Yamajiji
Good, at least Quentyn is finally getting Dorne. I liked the conversation between the brothers, and honestly Arianne with Robb is something I never would have seen coming, so I really like it, if only to see how both of their stupidities clash and interact. Nice chapter.
7/28 c20 1Lord Michael Demiurgos
Okay, now that they have officially planned that as their course of action, they have to tell Arianna the plan. Neither of them will be stupid enough now that they had it slapped into their faces to make the same mistake twice. Doubt Arianna's reaction will be the best though.
7/28 c20 Cronos 25
Muy buen capítulo sigue así
7/28 c20 3jiubantai-taichoCalmejaneJose
Oohhh Nononono please don’t make this into another Daenerys worshiping story Daenerys is a meek girl at first and then becomes an entitled little sh-t AND she was “married” to a Dothraki that alone will bring more problems in Westeros than anything else but still please have Quentyn stay a true leader and in the future ruler most go the full Rtard road and have an otherwise strong interesting character into a “Buts shesa my queen” once in the actual show and in most stories is enough. Other than that I have been enjoying this story a LOT
7/28 c20 silentmayhem
Seriously the north while strategic would never accept a Martell bride EVER they have nothing to offer to begin with so the very best would be the reach. Doran is smart but his plots sometimes are needlessly complex
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