7/29 c1 L.H. Rebirth
I really enjoyed this story! I loved the scheme in general, and how Fumiko basically baited Inui into the whole thing. But I have to say, there’s a lack perspective from the other side, and Fumiko feels too omnipotent when it came to Inui’s scheme. Perhaps, if it was explained more it wouldn’t come off as a little too all-knowing. Other than that, this fix has been refreshing and different. Thank you for the read!
I really enjoyed this story! I loved the scheme in general, and how Fumiko basically baited Inui into the whole thing. But I have to say, there’s a lack perspective from the other side, and Fumiko feels too omnipotent when it came to Inui’s scheme. Perhaps, if it was explained more it wouldn’t come off as a little too all-knowing. Other than that, this fix has been refreshing and different. Thank you for the read!
5/2 c1 emaribermudes0
I like how the main characters met each other, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to hardy novelstar. top or joye novelstar. top
I like how the main characters met each other, I love the plot and everything about this book. Good job writer! If you have some great stories like this one, you can publish it on Novel Star, just submit your story to hardy novelstar. top or joye novelstar. top
4/26 c1 dhea11
Awesome novel. I love it. You can join in NovelStar writing contest with a theme "WEREWOLVES" Prices are amazing!
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Awesome novel. I love it. You can join in NovelStar writing contest with a theme "WEREWOLVES" Prices are amazing!
httpsauthor. starlight. ink/essay/index. html
(PC)
httpapp. novelstar. top/index/index/special/id/87
or email any of the following editors;
hardy novelstar. top
joye novelstar. top
lena novelstar. top
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4/6 c1 m
aww thid was such a cute read. looking forward to more of your eorks! what stat concept wsd your fic based on?
aww thid was such a cute read. looking forward to more of your eorks! what stat concept wsd your fic based on?