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6/13 c79 amjohnston90
What a great end to your wonderful story. You really wrapped it up nicely, especially with using Allan’s thoughts to tie events together.
I love the thought of Robin and Marian happy in Locksley. Thanks for writing this! The historical wrap up at the end was very interesting!
6/12 c78 Xtine410
Eeek! I hope they catch Guy. They can't keep escaping. Nice action packed chapter. Glad Marian didn't get in the way too. haha
6/10 c78 amjohnston90
Oh! Such a good chapter with all the action of a great sword fight between Gisbourne and Robin. I loved all of the dialogue and the thoughts of the characters during the fight. Very well done.
I was not expecting the King, which added to the surprise. So Gisbourne escaped? But the Sheriff is caught and hopefully, Robin will find him.
Much is so funny! "Baritone?"
6/6 c77 amjohnston90
I did enjoy Marian’s thoughts on Guy’s characters and motivation. Also Robin’s observations as well. I understand Marian’s jealousy over Robin’s feelings for the King.
The Count was unable to convince Heinrich to side with the outlaws. Nice job on this chapter.
6/4 c76 Xtine410
I hope they know how lucky they are! They really don’t get captured for that long. Haha which is a very good thing! Hope they find the King soon.
6/4 c76 amjohnston90
What an exciting chapter! I am so glad that Djac is back and that she saved the gang. Will's words to Robin was so amazingly written, and Marian's as well. The Count sure has a lot of self awareness to admit that he won't change, even thought he knows he is wrong.
Now the gang is free and ready to rescue the King!
6/2 c75 amjohnston90
So glad to see the sheriff back and as icky as ever. Licking the tags was truly disgusting and so like him. Gisbourne beat Meg and Isabella poisoned her? Wow. That was a disturbing turn for those two.
Marian will always choose Robin, and I am sure that he has a plan...or will Djac save the day. I will be interested to hear what Will has to say at the Kahiel Addemnum Night!
6/1 c74 Xtine410
Ooohhh was not expecting that at the end!
6/1 c74 amjohnston90
Wow! So unexpected to find the sheriff in a cell where the King was suppose to be. Nice cliff hanger.
Great job with the dialogue between all the characters!
5/31 c73 amjohnston90
Hooray they have found the King...and Allan! This was so fun to read. I was worried for Marian, but she did a great job with handling the guards and locating the King!
5/29 c72 amjohnston90
The plan is in place and it is a great one! Marian’s part will be interesting and how will she get a servant’s dress?
Marian’s anger at the Count is funny, as is Much’s wanting to sing. Fun chapter.
5/28 c71 amjohnston90
This chapter was very good with many comedic moments. Will and Much's tiff over looking for the King. Marian's irritation with the Count, who still thinks that he has a chance with Marian (until he looks at Robin!). Very entertaining!
5/28 c71 Xtine410
Nice back and forth conversation amongst everyone. Especially the last part. Haha but I hope the guards do mean the king is there. Overall, nice chapter!
5/26 c70 amjohnston90
Nice chapter. It's great to know that Robin is not always the best at everything and admitting his poor abilities at math to Marian was nice to read. Pretty funny when Marian threw wine at the Count! With Allan cheating at cards, looks like the gang is going to have to rescue him also.
5/25 c69 amjohnston90
This plan of Robin’s sounds great! The conversation around the campfire was well written. Robin and Marian’s reaction on hearing about the death of Rodger was so sad and her revelations to Robin about her past feelings for Guy was well done.
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