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7/29 c19 8NinjaTaleFan19
Aww Percy geeking out was cute. AND CLOVER X PERCY YAY

Great chapter :D
7/23 c1 1AGandCW
so, basically... your Grouptale fanfic but Frisk uses their lovable personality.

nice.
7/14 c18 8NinjaTaleFan19
Awww Percy, he deserves the world :3
(Also thanks for the shoutout last chapter I forgot to mention that in my last review lol)
“Your name’s Corn or something, right?” BRAYDEN WHAT? Literally one of my favorite one liners I shouldn’t be finding this so funny XD
Genocide ooooo
7/11 c17 NinjaTaleFan19
Yayyy Undyne!

Papyrus jumping out the window gets me everytime, even in fanfics, he’s so chaotic XD

CODY IS BABY

Also ooo game saved? :O
7/11 c16 NinjaTaleFan19
“Brayden was carrying Faye, somehow” I can relate to this, I sometimes have my characters carry each other even when they probably wouldn’t have the strength to carry them XD. I think Aiden carried Ethan in my OG even though he probably can’t carry 100 pounds. Fanfiction logic hehe

Frisk is probably evil wtffff
I can’t believe you’ve done this
7/10 c15 NinjaTaleFan19
Clover x Percy :o

Poor Brayden just wants to have fun and kick so many butts . Him and Melody are the best comedic duo lol

Cody is such a sweetie wtf :’)
7/10 c14 NinjaTaleFan19
Awww poor Melody. And the socially awkward boy ended up comforting his best friend. Awww :’)

Faye nooooo you have to stay with the others :(((.

I don’t know if Frisk is lying or if they’re confused but :o

Also Clover is great, can’t wait for her part of the story
7/10 c13 NinjaTaleFan19
Faye needs a hug. She’s so precious :(. Also Melody backstory time? :OOO
7/9 c12 NinjaTaleFan19
Aww. Brayden comforting Melody at the piano was so sweet. They’ve got such a sibling vibe I love it. Frisk is still super sussy
7/2 c11 NinjaTaleFan19
Frisk is growing more and more suspicious, I wish I knew more about what their plans are, like if they’re going to be good or secretly evil or what :o. Poor Percy when he started shivering, I felt so bad for him :(. Brayden is so annoying and impulsive but I love him so much, as we’ve established before he and Ethan would probably be such good buddies :’). Also I would give my life for Cody, he’s such a sweetie. Another great chapter :D
7/2 c10 NinjaTaleFan19
I think I mentioned last review that I really like Melody, and I do. Honestly, she’s so relatable, literally our queen lol. I love that everyone cheered when she ate a fry, that made me chuckle haha. I’m excited for more about her character and also to see more about Percy. He tends to stick to the sidelines but I’m excited for his view too :0. Great job :D
6/19 c14 9DarkStorm98
Frisk and Chara lore drops can be pretty fun. I'm especially interested that the other kids didn't get to hear anything Frisk was saying to Chara.
5/20 c1 Guest
yes undertail fanfic be great
4/29 c7 8NinjaTaleFan19
I need to be more consistent with reviews XD. In a way, Brayden is annoying, but at the same time I kind of sympathize with him and I think his overprotectiveness of Faye is cute. I understand Frisk somewhat getting on his nerves and feeling as if they’re trying to him as Faye’s best friend. I honestly just feel bad for him- his dad’s a deadbeat and his older sisters had a dad he also wished was his. Maybe I just like him because I get emotionally attached to characters easily XD.

I loved the part where they had a snowball fight and tried to build a snowman and Melody kept complaining when her tutu got snow on it. She’s got to be my favorite because she’s the mom of the group lol. And Percy being antisocial and not joining in all of their activities but looking up at Melody mentioning Faye was hilarious.

Overall I think you’ve done great so far with the rewrite and can’t wait to read more :D
4/16 c5 9DarkStorm98
I suppose Flowey could be lying through his teeth, but it seems like Frisk at the very least has at least killed a few Monsters before resetting.

Reasonable. When you come to the Underground for the first time you don't really know how far you can get without resorting to violence. And you also probably don't realize you can come back after death.
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