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8/1 c19 Jake Hallows
Always enjoy the updates. Almost feels like a full on recap of events lol. I'm excited to see the reaction to her discovery of what has to happen for recompletion. As always, keep up the good work!
7/31 c19 6Wings of Avalon
Yikes. That was a rough conversation. And Meli not feeling anything towards the fact that Saix tortured the crap out of her and made her have such awful PTSD…that was just weird. But good! I love recap chapters.
7/28 c18 2coolmegan123
Aww... that was so cute. Even with only a few memories, she's already slowly coming back. It's very interesting reading her as a Nobody without emotions. The interactions are quite different, but also have a sense of sameness. Well done! I look forward to seeing how things progress from here!
7/24 c18 Jake Hallows
Makes sense to me that she'd be a little bolder without her normal emotions and thoughts pulling her down. I like where this is going. I hope it continues to be adorableness for a while before the inevitably very tense subject of recompletion. Let alone when they have to DO that.
7/24 c18 6Wings of Avalon
This chapter was like dipping your toes into a cool pool of water when it’s burning up outside. Just relief and relaxing all around. I loved that reunion of robot Meli and lovesick Riku. ?
7/17 c17 Jake Hallows
Back to town was honestly the last place I expected. I mean it makes sense, but I thought there'd be some more searching (either from the group or Meli doing some soul searching). Either way I enjoyed that. And Isa's little panic attack there too. Weird to imagine. Though, I almost wish Roxas had found her instead. Lol. Keep up the good work!
7/17 c17 2coolmegan123
Oh... that was an awkward encounter... I don't think they realize that Meli doesn't have the full memories back, just an inkling. But at least she's starting to remember more and more now. At least being in Twilight Town she's bound to run into Roxas and Xion too! Seems like a really good place for her to collect herself.

Seeing her reunion with Riku and the others from her perspective was quite interesting. To read what was going through her mind leading up to when she corridor'ed away made it all make so much more sense. Hope she sticks around Twilight Town! Probably one of the safer places to be!
7/17 c17 6Wings of Avalon
Okay, I definitely loved how robotic you made Meli in this chapter. A Nobody with no emotions and no ties to anything. Even if she had her memories, she wouldn’t feel anything - they would just be facts. This was the perfect way to see into the Nobody process if they even remembered anything. Absolutely perfect!
7/12 c16 2coolmegan123
Ah, no worries haha. I definitely knew it wouldn't be that easy, and that she'd definitely have reservations. Didn't know exactly what she'd do, but escaping into a Corridor at the first sign of nervousness sounds about status quo for someone running away who has darkness powers. But I'm glad there's not gonna be any more drawn out searches *nervous laugh*; they need to get her back! I'm hopeful they'll find her soon. She's likely having an onslaught of memories flooding back in just from seeing them again!

I'm glad that Robin could tell they were friends, and got a huge sense of nostalgia from hearing that Sora, Donald, and Goofy will be getting back together to fight Heartless on their world! No idea why, but that made me so happy haha. I love how both Riku and Kairi chastised Sora to stay out of trouble too; they know him WAY too well LOL.
7/10 c16 6Wings of Avalon
Gosh dang it! Yeah, I knew I wouldn’t be that easy, but that little sampling had me drooling for more. Although I’m sure everyone is a bit more relieved now, this is a process that will probably take a while. Excellent reunion though! For all the two minutes they had, it was worth it.
7/10 c16 Jake Hallows
Definitely interesting. Trying to think about where she would go but all the thoughts coming up have contacts to let the others know. Or my mind says The World That Never Was but I don't actually know if that's around at this point. Oh! Maybe she went to the Keyblade Graveyard because she remembered her death! That would be neat! Keep up the good work!
7/8 c15 2coolmegan123
Omg you can't do that to me! ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhh! To end on THAT! My heart went into shock!

Omg I'm crying... they found her! They FINALLY found her! I'm so happy... I can't wait to see what transpires next! I know it's going to be hard, but be strong Riku!

You've got me in so much suspense! I can't wait for what happens next!
7/3 c15 6Wings of Avalon
OH MY GOD IT’S HAPPENING. THIS IS NOT A DRILL.

Seriously, I have been WAITING for this moment. This kind of cliffhanger should be illegal. But that means I’ll be looking forward to the next update with bated breath.
6/26 c14 Jake Hallows
What i was referring to is how in every instance we the player didn't have a keyblade, we weren't able to harm the heartless (or nobodies for that matter) until we had it. Though I do see your point about Leon and Cloud and the rest. It was just something I thought about lol.
6/25 c14 Wings of Avalon
That, as a reader, was also satisfying seeing Riku and Kairi knock Isa senseless. True, it wasn’t him specifically, but it was a part of him. Nice touch!
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