5/31 c4 Guest
'Aaron's life is the polar opposite of Aaron's' I think it's a typo, you meant Kate's life. I love this line. Sam deeply regretted all. And Jack always praises Kate for being a great mother, so it's perfect. Great work!
'Aaron's life is the polar opposite of Aaron's' I think it's a typo, you meant Kate's life. I love this line. Sam deeply regretted all. And Jack always praises Kate for being a great mother, so it's perfect. Great work!
5/17 c3 Guest
I love how Jack thinks as a father now. Clever writing.
I love how Jack thinks as a father now. Clever writing.
5/3 c2 Guest
Great work! I loved the Jack/Sam scene. I always believed he was a good man and a decent father to Kate. She seemed to adore him. I wish we'd seen a reunion after the rescue.
Great work! I loved the Jack/Sam scene. I always believed he was a good man and a decent father to Kate. She seemed to adore him. I wish we'd seen a reunion after the rescue.
5/3 c2 1SoFeelingTheLove
I love how protective Jack is of Kate. Sam let her get hurt, maybe he tried to get her out and couldn’t do anything but it sounds like he didn’t try hard enough. And then he completely abandoned her after she killed Wayne. I’m curious to see what Kate’s reaction will be and if she’ll agree to see him.
I love how protective Jack is of Kate. Sam let her get hurt, maybe he tried to get her out and couldn’t do anything but it sounds like he didn’t try hard enough. And then he completely abandoned her after she killed Wayne. I’m curious to see what Kate’s reaction will be and if she’ll agree to see him.
5/1 c1 SoFeelingTheLove
This is interesting! Can’t wait to read more. I never understood how Sam could turn his back on Kate like that, especially since in your story it’s confirmed Wayne abused her. No wonder Jack is protective.
This is interesting! Can’t wait to read more. I never understood how Sam could turn his back on Kate like that, especially since in your story it’s confirmed Wayne abused her. No wonder Jack is protective.