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7/8 c1 42Rave The Rich
You know how sometimes to tease people they tell them, "You're funny when you're angry". Well, that's the vibe I go from Courtney when she threw the brush Miranda's way. I guess it's because Courtney Gripling was never angry or bitter like Miranda, but she's rarely pushed to limits like in this short tale or challenged at a base level with being honest.

In any case, it's a short but neat story. I do like how you show Miranda as a true friend to Courtney even if she's not the biggest fan of her specific preference in the fairer sex. Also, the fact that they nevertheless work to keep up appearances is genuine. People don't often shout out there orientation to the rooftops. It's more of a process.

I don't know if you want to continue with Courtney letting Ginger know, but I'd like to see that. I've always had a soft spot for the two.

In any case, great work! Keep it up!

-RTR
7/6 c1 109otherrealmwriter
This was a cute story and yeah I could see Miranda picking up on something like that. And I love how Miranda reacts because that is spot on for her. Nice work.

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