7/19 c1 22Wes Imlay
Very promising first chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of the story goes!
Very promising first chapter, I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of the story goes!
5/19 c2 Chronus1326
Good story! Suggestions: unless they're hero ships (plot mainstays) we don't care about escort names or commanders, just the capitol ships.
Good job including the pirates, are they ex-CDF? Good job to Blythe as well, because 1% of zero is still zero.
Good story! Suggestions: unless they're hero ships (plot mainstays) we don't care about escort names or commanders, just the capitol ships.
Good job including the pirates, are they ex-CDF? Good job to Blythe as well, because 1% of zero is still zero.
5/19 c1 Chronus1326
Your paragraph and thought separation needs some work, but im very happy to see a new BSG story thats not romance/agnst/hurt - there's no room for crying on a Battlestar! Followed!
Your paragraph and thought separation needs some work, but im very happy to see a new BSG story thats not romance/agnst/hurt - there's no room for crying on a Battlestar! Followed!
4/19 c1 Gary Harris
I have enjoyed your first 5 chapters( an hope for many more). There are several possible ways you could take this story. As the pirates, the king or even the colonial military. I hope you keep writing.
I have enjoyed your first 5 chapters( an hope for many more). There are several possible ways you could take this story. As the pirates, the king or even the colonial military. I hope you keep writing.