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17m c22 Guest
OMG LOVE IT! PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE NEXT! LOVE IT
7/31 c21 7SJlove07
I can't believe I'm just reading this story! It's amazing please update soon!
7/26 c21 4Tearhart
I will feel sad if Carolyn steals Betsy away, even if it’s only temporary. Then again, WB could definitely help with Lawyers
7/26 c21 Guest
love it love it! more hyde,jackie & betsy moments!: please please update next!
7/21 c20 Guest
Another great chapter! It's a bit of a bummer to hear that the end of the story is drawing closer because I've really enjoyed your work. Guess all good things must come to an end, unfortunately!

It's great that Carolyn caught them in a family moment, but it's super realistic that she'd point out the possibility of Betsy catching cold. Wonderful that they're play fighting now and not actually trying to pick each other apart. And I'm very pro-kiss! Thumbs up!
7/20 c20 Tearhart
Nice. They finally kissed without being cruel to each other. Betsy pouting was adorable. Jackie getting flustered was fantastic. It always seems to rain harder when someone comments on it.
7/20 c20 Guest
aaaah love it! love it! please update next! please update next!
7/19 c19 Tearhart
They finally communicated. Also, I like that you pointed out Jackie could’ve slept with Kelso there. A lot of people act like she never would’ve, but season 8 proved that there was a possibility. She debated about answering his proposal after all.

They both screwed each other over, but they can move on from it.

Please update soon!
7/19 c18 Tearhart
So many things about this story are adorable. This is easily one of the best fan fictions I have ever read and I’ve been reading fan fictions since 4th grade (I’m applying for grad school now).
7/19 c17 Tearhart
I feel really bad for Carolyn here. Never thought I’d say that. Hopefully she’ll get to be in Betsy’s life a lot.

Hyde was extremely sweet this chapter, without feeling like it’s OOC. Some fan fictions have him feel like a romance novel protagonist, but this feels real.

Also, I’m glad Jackie is getting a day off. All parents will need one.
7/19 c16 Tearhart
I loved this chapter. It was a perfect way to bring Hyde some closure on being a father, a perfect way to honor Kelso, and a perfect way to give Jackie more reasons to authentically get back to Hyde.
7/19 c15 Tearhart
I love that Hyde defended Jackie against Carolyn and his own words. It makes rooting for him much better. Also, I like that Carolyn actually listened to Betsy and Hyde. It makes me root a little for her too (even if I despise her canon character). She showed some humanity in the show and that same humanity is showing in her here.
7/19 c14 Tearhart
I’m glad he apologized and that he acknowledged he’s being like his parents. It shows character growth.

I’m reviewing this as much as a I can cuz it’s very well written and I want you to have as much motivation to write as possible. I hope your emails are not being flooded by me lol
7/19 c13 Tearhart
I hate Carolyn Rockwell, but man is she good at boosting the tension. She’s so judgmental and intimidating. She’s also very well written.
7/19 c12 Tearhart
They are both so dumb. All they had to do is tell the other they went too fast and they need to take it slower. Eric and Donna are going to kick their ass.
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