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7/20 c4 2holoswirls
It was super refreshing to read your work again! I liked the phone call element as it allowed for multiple other senior professionals to be in touch with Emily and still show they have their own jobs, keeping the pseudo-realism Jurassic Park is based on in mind. I also liked how you show the differences between each original character Emily interacts with based on the nature of their conversation, an example Tim being clearly younger than Billy. Looking forward to more.
7/20 c4 4BaDWolF89
I’m definitely kinda shipping Emily and Billy here, hope something happens
6/25 c3 2holoswirls
Great chapter! I really liked the scene where Emily was trying to sleep, excellent use of tech. Sometimes use of tech can be hamfisted in stories so it's nice to see it well done. The emails between Claire and Emily show how much Claire will change after JW. Oh no, whats gonna happen with Emily and Casey?
6/23 c2 holoswirls
Oh my goodness that was amazing! I really like how strong Emily's reasoning was to go to Jurassic World even when she has every reason not to. That was really commendable. I also like her relationship with Casey, very sweet and it felt natural. The real world aspects like her making food or interactions with physical elements really bring the story to life.
6/13 c2 4BaDWolF89
Seriously needing more of this fic!
6/6 c1 2holoswirls
Very clear and concise writing as always! Looking forward to more and how Emily eventually accepts the offer.

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