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8/1 c10 Traci Purtan
Very amazing story. looking forward to the next chapter.
8/1 c10 RCKBNFSK
I love the interaction between Kate and Alexis. I always felt the show's writers let us down by not having more Kate/Alexis time. Looking forward to next week.
7/31 c10 6Hazmatt
Great story so far! I'm really enjoying it! I look forward to reading more!
7/31 c10 9theputz913
Glad Alexis and Kate got a chance to clear the air and maybe make Kate’s stay at the loft a lot less tension filled. Hope Kate can have one of those types of conversations with Castle soon too.
7/31 c10 5Andreacherrypie
Really loved how this chapter turned out :)
7/31 c9 Andreacherrypie
Never smooth sailing because we can’t stop thinking of ways to make Kate suffer
7/30 c10 ClaraBow51
Ugh, I totally felt Kate's unease in this chapter. Being an introvert myself, I really felt her discomfort when Alexis and Martha were gawking at her on the couch.
It amused me with Martha and her lack of any filter but no one wants to hear they look like death even when you know you do. But I could definitely hear Martha and Castle bickering during that scene lol.

I thought for sure that I was going to get my throwing up part at the table. (What is it with me and vomit?) But Castle's attentiveness was so him even when Kate tried, and tried to tell him she was fine.

To be honest, I never cared for Alexis. I always felt (especially as it went on) that she talked down to her father and was a self-centred brat. I understood her reasoning for her coldness towards Beckett in canon but I felt like it really wasn't mentioned and sure as hell wasn't resolved. While I know this story isn't about Kate's and Alexis' rough patch, I appreciate that it wasn't dragged out and Alexis gave her blessing for Kate to be back in Castle's life.

Funny and so him to bring Alexis a candy bar back. But on the show she would've said, 'I'm too grown up for candy or I just brush my teeth and I need to go to sleep at my self-imposed bedtime.'
I can't be the only one happy when she moved in with Pi. Wish she would've stayed with him.

Loved Kate lounging in her jammies and the banter and tenderness between them. Even when he's scolding her about staying put on the couch lol.
7/29 c10 cabreradepartamento
At least she is not grumpy and is trying to match the treatment she receives and improving her relationship with the whole family, now she only has to see how she corrects her lies and embraces what she wants and ebit damage those who love her.
7/29 c10 sasans
Given how independent Kate is I can imagine that she feels self conscious being at the loft but she is right where she is supposed to be no matter what she claims. She is in no condition to be on her own at the moment. She is still very weak and needs to rebuild her strength and appetite. On her own she would not eat properly and not recover. Very good chapter.
7/29 c10 Castle4Eva
I'm glad Kate and Alexis had a chance to talk. I don't like it when Alexis is cold to Beckett because of the shooting.
7/29 c10 17wendykw
Kate is such a difficult patient. She needs to act like an adult. Thanks for another chapter.
7/29 c10 Guest
great… i love the castle/rodgers family…
7/29 c10 txgal2015
Alexis was so sweet to stay with Kate. i bet they will get along great now.

Thank you

Kim
7/29 c10 Speedy.Mouse
Nice chapter with Alexis and Kate getting on the same page. Maybe this little diversion is just what they need to see that they are both on the same page especially regarding Rick.
7/29 c10 21Swordwriter
I enjoyed this chapter very much. Kate's finally showing at least a little sense. Step by step, I guess but we need a few long strides.
Swordwriter
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