7/21 c6 Guest
Poor Dimya. Love how you've managed to display the trauma from Anya's perspective after that terrible night in Ekateringberg. Hope to see more!
Poor Dimya. Love how you've managed to display the trauma from Anya's perspective after that terrible night in Ekateringberg. Hope to see more!
7/17 c1 4JustDerkT
Ooh, I really like this premise. An dark-themed, action-packed alternate history where Anastasia avenges her family! Yes!
The only suggestion I have would be to place more dialogue in the fight scenes to make them more dynamic and realistic. Certain characters might speak some badass lines at each other before the actual fighting.
Still, well done for an introduction. I will follow this story with great interest.
Ooh, I really like this premise. An dark-themed, action-packed alternate history where Anastasia avenges her family! Yes!
The only suggestion I have would be to place more dialogue in the fight scenes to make them more dynamic and realistic. Certain characters might speak some badass lines at each other before the actual fighting.
Still, well done for an introduction. I will follow this story with great interest.
7/13 c5 ComparedDread12
Hey man, you might want to re-upload this chapter. I think FFN messed up the paragraphs.
Hey man, you might want to re-upload this chapter. I think FFN messed up the paragraphs.
7/9 c4 ComparedDread12
Intresting story, though there are a few grammar mistakes but other than that its good.
i look forward to the next chapter.
Intresting story, though there are a few grammar mistakes but other than that its good.
i look forward to the next chapter.