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8/1 c11 6Shian1998
Another great chapter! Liked when Owen, Claire and Lowery worked together trying to figure it out. At least they found the employee, despite being too late to save him. Felt bad for Claire when she found out about his death. Good that they set up more alert systems to detect the mystery animal. Liked when Owen and Claire pretty much agreed to move in together. Good that they finally saw a clearer image at the end, and curious to find out what it is.

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!

Say hi to the spider for me. Lol :)
7/30 c11 Guest
Scorpius rex? Of el chuppacabra
7/29 c11 Sconder84
I'm really enjoying your story. I like the slow burn of what is actually going on at our beloved Isla Nublar with the missing (presumably dead) pig, the mangled goat, dead guest and dead guard. When it was being built up in the last chapter as possibly a dinosaur, I was really hoping it was going to maybe be the adult Dilos like from the original novel that were like 10 feet tall, no crest and a cheetah like pattern, but there would be a mention of a substance on the kills that would wind up being venom. Owen not knowing what was in the picture would definitely rule out a raptor, so we know it's not his girls. Maybe Troodon or Herrerasaurus. That could possibly be different enough that they wouldn't know what the animal was. Anyway, thank you again for the wonderful story and giving me something to look forward to on Thursday nights.
7/25 c10 Guest
Use a shoe on the Spyder
7/24 c10 Shian1998
Another great chapter! Liked when Claire and Owen discussed what could have taken the pig and the goat. Curious to find out what it is. Good idea of their's to have Lowery set up an alert system in order to rule out some possibilities. Glad the raptors didn't actually have a problem with Claire in that scene but were growling at something in the trees (probably whatever's causing the current situation). Wonder what happened to the missing employee and whether or not they're okay. Curious to find out how all these incidents may be connected.

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
7/18 c9 Shian1998
Great few chapters! Sorry for missing the last couple weeks; been busy lately.

Agreed with Owen about it feeling weird when Hoskins was on his side. Was amused when Lowery suggested using the Therizinosaurus as a Halloween attraction. Felt bad for Owen and Claire during that argument. Felt like both were putting words in each other's mouths and were both overreacting to each other. Glad that's the most angsty they'll be getting.

Felt bad for the guy that died like that, even if his own idiocy was the cause of it. Wonder how he ended up in the Baryonyx paddock. Felt bad for Claire for how long she went without sleeping. Glad she had Zara and Owen supporting her. Loved how they each made sure she ate and he got her to sleep. Enjoyed their moment overlooking the view.

Wonder what's going on with the livestock suppliers. First a pig disappearing, then a goat getting bitten in a herbivore territory. Wonder if there's anything going on there.

Great few chapters! Looking forward to the next one!
7/2 c7 Guest
I dont like this Owen, poor Claire. She need a lovely and friendly guy, Owen can be rude, but always is a good man for Claire. Poor Claire. i think Claire feel soo alone in thhis world. I hope she broke up with Owen, she need a real man.
6/25 c6 Shian1998
Another great chapter! Poor Claire, that would've hurt. At least her injury wasn't too serious. Good that Owen and the others figured out where both Claire and the raptors and managed to get control of the situation. Felt bad for the raptors when they got scared, but at least they were returned to the paddock safely and they looked at how to prevent that situation happening again. Damn it Hoskins, can't you stop annoying everyone and just shut up? Hope he doesn't get his way in this fic.

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
6/18 c5 Shian1998
Another great chapter! Poor Echo; glad Owen managed to free her from those vines, and also prevent her from escaping with her sisters. Silly baby raptors, going off exploring. :) Lot of inconveniences making everyone's day harder. Poor Claire, having everyone going insane around her. Glad she found where the raptors are, though how she found out is quite unfortunate. Hope she'll be alright and able to contact someone.

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
6/12 c4 Shian1998
Another great chapter! Enjoyed Claire's conversation with Zara, and liked how supportive Zara was of her. Glad that Claire and Owen were able to have a civil discussion and resolve the argument, and glad things got better with them quickly and they agreed to communicate more about those things.

Good that the Indominus was put down. Interested by this new dinosaur their planning. Searched for pictures of the Therizinosaurus and I agree that it's pretty crazy looking. Hoping things go well with it, and looking forward to seeing what happens.

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
6/4 c3 Shian1998
Another good chapter! Good that Masrani decided to listen to Owen's advice, and that Claire admitted that she knew it was the right thing to do even if she didn't like it.

Felt bad for Owen and Claire during that fight. Things definitely got messy there. I get how Claire might not feel good about Owen telling Masrani directly instead of letting her handle it, but at the same time I feel Owen didn't intend on coming across as going over her head. He did screw up though when he implied he thought she might not pass on the email. Hoping they patch things up the next time they talk.

I guess the secret's out now as well. Didn't like those who were trying to engage in "locker room" talk, and glad Owen didn't participate in that. Liked when Barry revealed he'd suspected for a while.

Good chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
6/2 c2 Shian1998
Another great chapter! Felt bad for Claire when she was worrying over the project being cancelled and not wanting her efforts to go to waste. Glad though that she recognises that ending it is probably the right thing to do. Enjoying how her and Owen's relationship is going so well, and really hope nothing goes wrong with it. Good that Owen went in to examine the Indominus, and loved how he really tried to keep an open mind and find any possible solution. Good that his report was sent in the end, and looking forward to seeing how things go.

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one!
5/24 c1 guest
i am so so happy you are posting a new story! I love your works and hte updates make my week!
I liked this first bit and can't wait to see where you go with it!
5/21 c1 Shian1998
Good to see you again! Nice prologue, and looking forward to the rest of this story! Liked the setup for Owen and Claire's relationship here. Curious to see how differently things will play out with the two of them already together. Wonder what happened with the Indominus. Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

Yeah, covid's been going on for a long time now. I'm hanging in there well enough. Hope the situation gets better for you soon. Good on you for getting the vaccine.

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