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6/9 c1 12Nontacitare
Wow! This was powerful and realistic, and so tragic. You really know how to get to the heart of relationships on this show.
6/3 c1 6Gotapenname
This is great short story.
5/29 c1 2acorntree1
The story was very emotional because I can understand where all three sides are coming from. Isa sees a bit through Esteban's happy facade, but not all the way through and Elena is too fixated on her hate for Shuriki despite having killed her already, so she transfers part of that hate on Esteban.

The magic fixing the broken cup was beautiful symbolism but the uneasy feeling about Elena's overly-emotional choices was still hanging in the air in the end. It was captured very wel! The comment about the Agama brothers was exactly what I thought when I first watched the episode with their treasure hunk. As great as Elena is at giving advice, she sometimes fails to see her own flaws and emotions clearly enough to follow her own lessons. (Also fitting to my Eleteo headcanon of Elena not really noticing her feelings for him in the beginning when he is already head over heels and then she shoves it away because there are more important things to be done with the final Darkness and Coronation looming in the future).
5/27 c1 2princessbutterflybookworm
This was so well done. I always wanted to know their conversation they had about Esteban. I could feel the emotions when Elena snapped at Isabel. They are all trying to work out their feelings. I feel for Isabel just trying to understand all that has happened and the pain Elena is going through.
5/27 c1 emily
Wow, this is amazing!Love the drama between the sisters! Could you write more stories with Elena and Isabel's parents though?

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