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7/6 c9 1UI Ghosty
Update! Please! Its been like, 3 months!
6/5 c9 Agustin Verbanaz
Good
4/16 c9 josereyes121367
Oh boy, Peter is really getting desperate. I know he is justified to be acting like this after al it's the Green Goblin, but I just hope Felicia is able to keep him sane if not able to comfort him.
4/16 c9 1Kryn Womble
High-key getting Batman vibes with that interrogation. I am all for Peter getting slightly darker with Felicia having to work to maintain the Friendly Neighbourhood-persona. Be a fun role reversal with the city and the criminal underworld collectively losing their shit over Spider-Man getting scary again.
4/1 c9 Akira-Hayama
I like how we’re getting glimpses of Peter’s more...darker side(?) Don’t think he’d outright kill anyone, but the anti-hero thing is such a cool path. The whole Green Goblin situation definitely has him tilted though; good or bad thing, I don’t know, coz only time will tell in future chapters, but him threatening the Oscar guy is definitely the start of it. Lowkey like it though coz he’s not gonna get anywhere if he’s always being ‘Your friendly neighbourhood Spider-Man!’

Feel like Spider-Man will sort of become what JJ has always portrayed as in the news. A ‘menace’, but not really. He’s more unhinged at the fact the man who’s fucked his life quite a bit could he back from the dead. He’s not going about it the best way, but desperate times call from desperate measures, and if it involves threatening and almost killing the bad guys, so be it.

Don’t think Felicia will allow him to go over the line though. They might do a role change and it’ll be Felicia who has to make sure Peter stays on that right path, which will be interesting. No doubt she has his back though, coz he is her Spider, and she’ll be damned if anything were to happen to the man behind the mask.

Great chapter overall. Till next time!
3/11 c1 1UI Ghosty
Plz update! this is he best spiderman and black cat story ive read!
2/18 c8 Guest
Hey! Great chapter. I liked Peter's reaction when Felicia talked about their relationship and I also liked how as soon as Pete heard pumpkin bombs he got serious. You haven't updated in half a year so this review is definitely late but plz update.
2/10 c8 Guest
Hey, I know this review might be a little late, but PLEASE continue this fic. It's rly gud so far and u havent updated in a good half a year so there's probably no hopw but may as well give it a shot.
11/30/2020 c8 Guest
Hey. So, I just read this story again and it would be great if you continued. I know I'm not the only one. Don't worry about it being so long. We just really want the next chapter.
9/9/2020 c1 Jeremiah Woodley
please update soon! im invested in this story and I really wanna read more of it
8/4/2020 c8 Mnej
I really hope you continue this. Felicia and Peter have a complicated relationship and I like how you portrayed it. Although aggresive/violent Peter is not my type, I really enjoy this story. I hope you keep writing.
7/18/2020 c8 No one
Hey I’ve been reading this fic and I really enjoyed it but you haven’t finished it off and I really want to know what happens to peter in future chapters. I really like the dark and gritty stories of Spider-Man especially ones where he becomes violent and this exact fic is the best one I’ve found so far, I also really like the introduction of black cat and how she tries to help peter, which is different to most fics. Anyways I hope alls well and you can come round to finishing this fic.
7/7/2020 c1 WoodleyGaming28
I'm loving this story. just read it all right now. cant wait for more! please update!
6/5/2020 c8 Leviathan117
Amazing story, just read the whole thing in one sitting. Can’t wait for more chapters.
6/3/2020 c8 Akira-Hayama
The complexity of Peter and Felicia’s relationship is probably one of my favourite and annoying traits of them. Mainly because of Peter’s hero complex and always wanting to do good, and Felicia just doing things for a thrill; they both clash, but you can’t deny the chemistry that’s obviously there between them.

You’ve already stated their relationship will be quite a slow burner, and if that whole interaction didn’t summarise the struggle they’ll both have with dealing with one another, don’t know what does. I do like how you’ve done Felicia though, and how she genuinely cares for Peter, but add their past relationship, and Peter’s PTSD with the Green Goblin, of course things aren’t gonna go smoothly.

And speaking of PTSD, that whole pumpkin bomb incident really turned a switch for Peter. And the Peter’s reaction to the aftermath of it was (imo) done pretty well, to show how much Green Goblin has affected Peter. And with this whole case, we get to see a more grittier(?) version of Spider-Man, and I’m all for it. Don’t mind the friendly neighbourhood Spidey that jokes about everything, but Peter’s gone through some difficult things, and I don’t think getting reminded of the Green Goblin will benefit the ones that instigated it. It’s also a step closer to Peter transitioning from the traditional Spider-Man outfit, to the black one, which has me quite hyped to see.

An enjoyable chapter to read though. Don’t care how long the updates take, coz you always deliver whenever you publish a new chapter! Hope you’re doing well in these chaotic times and taking care of yourself.

Great chapter overall. Till next time!
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