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5/3 c42 2Aphaea21
A wonderful chapter - So pleased to see you have updated! Lovely to read about these characters again. I was thinking of this story only a few days ago. Hope you are well.

Poor Alina - it is so hard to feel powerless to help someone. I really like the way Jack challenges her, showing an extra facet to the issue. It is also so interesting to see how Erik is becoming so aware of others and their needs, and I love his development as a character - how he is now moving forwards and using his own growing awareness to support others - Daniel and Alina. I really enjoy your thoughtful and well written story so much.

I can totally understand your comments re Anna Preston - there are some characters that are very difficult and uncomfortable to immerse yourself in, and its definitely the right decision to look after your mental health. It does not detract from the story at all.
2/4 c41 reddeath92
Thanks for the new chapter!
11/26/2020 c40 Aphaea21
Another wonderful chapter. Daniel is a typical fixed mindset child - I have worked with a few myself. The outward bravado hiding a surprisingly fragile sense of self. So well written. Also so interesting to see Erik navigating his way through the minefield of other people and their emotions/reactions! As always such a pleasure to read!
11/22/2020 c39 Hinanui98
I love jour story so much ! Everything is great, absolutely amazing. I cannot wait for the update, what will happen next?
10/21/2020 c35 Hinanui98
I loved this chapter! Eric and Olly, he understands Eric in a way. I would not mind reading more Olly PoV but I prefer Eric and Alina.
Great chapter and I cannot wait for the next updatebut you know it haha). Take care !
10/16/2020 c34 Aphaea21
Another lovely chapter! Amelija and Erik might even end up liking each other (as friends) at this rate! :)
10/14/2020 c32 summerrossa
Can I just say that I stumbled upon this story somehow and it has got me through some tough times. Your writing is stunning. Your characters are beautiful. Please keep it up- you've made a real difference in the last few months of my life!
10/5/2020 c15 Suehunt1945gm
I'm still old fashioned about erik. You seem not to like him much and there is a lot more good to him than Anelka. At least Alina likes him . Christine liked him too. Perfect raoul.
10/4/2020 c33 Aphaea21
I love this story so much! Just so beautifully written, I have so enjoyed losing myself in this tale. Glad to see you are still updating - please, please continue, this is such a gentle, thoughtful exploration of the characters and I am desperate to find out what happens to them all!
10/2/2020 c33 reddeath92
thank you very much for the new chapter! it was great!
8/18/2020 c28 Hinanui98
Yesss another chapter ! You don't disappoint. Wonderful chapter ! I enjoy how Eric's character is developing and his relationships with every other character.
Can't wait for the next update (with Piotr I hope, love him).
6/19/2020 c27 reddeath92
You came back! I am so happy to see you updated again!
1/1/2020 c1 4guiltypleasureffnet
wonderful writing. notifications on.
11/18/2019 c26 reddeath92
Erik Giry? I’m not sure I like it as a last name, but it’s very nice that Antonie gave it to Erik. I love how Erik plays with little Piort, they’re very close.
thanks for the new chapters!
11/9/2019 c25 8Pappenheimer
I'm so glad I found this story!

I can't wait to read more. What will happen over the night? Will Erik have one of his night terrors? Will it be a quiet night? I look forward to reading Alina and Amelija bonding together, and Amelija learning the enifma of Erik!
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