7/11 c11 Stacye White
I have read all of the books you have published on Amazon, and really admire your writing. I do hope you will finish this story and publish it as well.
I have read all of the books you have published on Amazon, and really admire your writing. I do hope you will finish this story and publish it as well.
3/8 c11 Guest
An interesting chapter! Cannot wait until John & Margaret meet again and for the Harvest Ball to take place. Eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Thanks for writing. Xx
An interesting chapter! Cannot wait until John & Margaret meet again and for the Harvest Ball to take place. Eagerly anticipating the next chapter. Thanks for writing. Xx
2/28 c11 mencia
This is a great North and South variation. There are marked changes in the story, yet the personalities of the main characters seem to fit in nicely with the original ones. Thank you
This is a great North and South variation. There are marked changes in the story, yet the personalities of the main characters seem to fit in nicely with the original ones. Thank you
2/22 c11 Guest
That sounds promisingly like we are focusing on the mystery part rather than the romance for a bit. Lovely! More of that, pretty please?!
Ok, I really don't want John to step down from being a Magistrate, I'd rather he'd get to do some interesting things to do as such. But we'll see.
I adore the idea of mother Hale to go to London without Margaret. Hopefully she'll cheer up!
Not too interested in the Ladies being catty, I'm afraid.
So, well, thanks for this chapter! Hopefully there's more to come :)
That sounds promisingly like we are focusing on the mystery part rather than the romance for a bit. Lovely! More of that, pretty please?!
Ok, I really don't want John to step down from being a Magistrate, I'd rather he'd get to do some interesting things to do as such. But we'll see.
I adore the idea of mother Hale to go to London without Margaret. Hopefully she'll cheer up!
Not too interested in the Ladies being catty, I'm afraid.
So, well, thanks for this chapter! Hopefully there's more to come :)
2/24 c11 100recycled
Fun fact: I didn't think Johns behaviour at the end of chapter 10 was unfriendly. I thought he was explaining, that he knows how scandal in the family feels. So I had expected a misunderstanding between Margaret and John here - but now he thinks himself, that he's reacted unfriendly. Soooo... I'm really curious, how this story will develop further. Nice twist to let the draper invite Margaret to the harvest ball.
Fun fact: I didn't think Johns behaviour at the end of chapter 10 was unfriendly. I thought he was explaining, that he knows how scandal in the family feels. So I had expected a misunderstanding between Margaret and John here - but now he thinks himself, that he's reacted unfriendly. Soooo... I'm really curious, how this story will develop further. Nice twist to let the draper invite Margaret to the harvest ball.
2/20 c11 Poppy
Can’t read like this can you make necessary changes please
Can’t read like this can you make necessary changes please
2/20 c11 Guest
Oh, hey, I am very exited to see that there is an update! However it seems there is a small formating error? Hopefully you'll be able to fix.
I am looking forward to reading this :)
Oh, hey, I am very exited to see that there is an update! However it seems there is a small formating error? Hopefully you'll be able to fix.
I am looking forward to reading this :)
2/21 c11 Libt1096
Julia ... so happy to receive an email with news of an update ! Chapter 11 is perfect ... shipping Mrs. Hake off to London to spend time with her sister is a great idea and of course a little Margaret / John tension adds to the intrigue. Looking forward to Chp. 12 !
Julia ... so happy to receive an email with news of an update ! Chapter 11 is perfect ... shipping Mrs. Hake off to London to spend time with her sister is a great idea and of course a little Margaret / John tension adds to the intrigue. Looking forward to Chp. 12 !
2/20 c11 15ElizaG1
Hi! There’s formatting issues with the chapter- codes are appearing and make to hard to read.
Hi! There’s formatting issues with the chapter- codes are appearing and make to hard to read.
2/11 c10 Jeslovsu2
Will there be any more chapters? This is really good writing! I’ve got no the of your kindle books! Plus the the other one with the short shorts in paperback! I hope you can come back and complete this. Thank you for your wonderful story telling!JS
Will there be any more chapters? This is really good writing! I’ve got no the of your kindle books! Plus the the other one with the short shorts in paperback! I hope you can come back and complete this. Thank you for your wonderful story telling!JS