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2/26/2020 c1 1Kina1551
Please, you have to write more
7/6/2019 c1 12creativesm75
Poor Jack
2/12/2019 c1 24KitoH
He killed JAMIE!?
12/12/2018 c1 1Onxy.gacha
Btw my oc is my profile pic
12/12/2018 c1 Onxy.gacha
I LOVE this story so much that I wanted to use it with my OC’s backstory
If I can have your permission to write my OC’s backstory based off this story that would be AMAZING
Overall good story tho
12/8/2018 c2 sparklehannah
I think it's because of the M rating. I've been noticing I have to specifically put M rating in the filter for M rated stories to appear on here. That's why it took me a bit to find this story and review.
12/2/2018 c1 frostyfann
holy crap... like, WHAT?! that was the SADDEST thing i've ever read omg poor Jack! wow. great job but just wow... O.o i hope you do more in the future!
12/2/2018 c1 sparklehannah
You still write an excellent dark Jack. You still manage to keep him fun loving but you also make him eerie and horrifying at the same time. I like that Jack made it like a game to take each of the kids out before the others could notice. The icing on top of this horror cake is that Jack managed to turn only Jamie into his complete hater before killing him. The irony hurts. It was heartbreaking to see the fight leave Jamie after Jack killed Sophie. I'd definitely read more if you wrote more because not many people can pull off an excellent dark Jack like you. Great work.
12/1/2018 c1 10hawkflight of riverclan
Oh. Wow.
I just read ACDIH and now this...
I'd just like to say that you did a fantastic job. I love stories like this, whether it be mind control or something else entirely, and you did wonderfully. I adore your portrayal of dark!Jack. I also love your portrayal of him after he was... saved? Can you call this saved?

I would love seeing more of this, especially the events after ACDIH, before what we see at the end of this. He ran off to find refuge from even his friends, the other guardians, but what happened before that? What happened when everyone got to see him? What did they do? What did he do? Is Pitch really just done with him?
It's totally cool if you don't ever continue this though. Just having these two stories to read was great.

I'm really glad I decided to look for more things to read today. Otherwise, I might have missed these! That would have been a tragedy.

Sorry if this comment is a bit off. I don't usually comment on things. But I wanted to let you know I really liked this.
12/1/2018 c1 Guest
whoa... dude that was insane
12/1/2018 c1 brooklynusaman1997
quality work I gotta say :)

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