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12/19/2018 c1 22Laina Lee
First off, good for you for jumping in with your first story. That takes a lot of courage and there certainly aren't enough FF stories on Emma. I am curious though as to why you flipped the Knightly boys' birth order and lessened the age divide between Rex (George) and Kera (Emma). It is cute to make Rex hold and become enchanted with baby Emma but his dialog seems too mature for an eight-year-old (more of a contrast between what he said then and the words he now uses as an adult looking back would be in order). I really like, though, that she gave her first smile for him and the detail of the disposable camera capturing the moment and it being his favorite picture is a nice detail.
12/11/2018 c1 Steve
Great work! When does the next part come out?
12/9/2018 c1 ThinkICannot
What a lovely story - a modern twist on a classic Jane Austen indeed. I look forward to your next update!
12/4/2018 c1 Bill
This is great! I'm very interested in where this is going!

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