12/22/2019 c7 Guest
This is pretty good. I would work on making your words flow a little more and using more descriptive language. Your grammar and punctuation was a little off as well and made the story slightly less enjoyable. All in all though, well done. Keep trying! :)
This is pretty good. I would work on making your words flow a little more and using more descriptive language. Your grammar and punctuation was a little off as well and made the story slightly less enjoyable. All in all though, well done. Keep trying! :)
12/23/2018 c1 Guest
Awh this is so adorable!
Awh this is so adorable!