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4/4/2019 c6 Guest
wow pretty amazing plot. ur a gifted writer.
just a small problem nothing major but ur spelling was off on some places. if u could get that fixed i would say this is publishing worthyy.
1/24/2019 c6 llamaaacorn
Why are all the endings cliffhanger? It's really good. The action is starting. There's so many ways that this could go I can't wait to see where. The premonition is still worrying me a bit though. The writing is good but I feel like sky and zed relationship isn't there. I don't know how to explain it but I like the story and it is well written.

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1/15/2019 c5 llamaaacorn
Sad then happy and then drama. I really need to find out what happens. Also sky's dream is getting me paranoid. But the wedding sounds absolutely beautiful.

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12/30/2018 c4 Lillo
It's finally starting to kick off! I'm looking forward to the story becoming more Sky orientated. I get the chapters are just starting to get the kick off, but I cant wait for it to become more Sky and Zed working through everything.
12/30/2018 c4 llamaaacorn
What?! Oh my God! Such a cliffhanger. Why?! I mean it means your writing is good because the cliffhanger worked but it's only 4 chapters. It's too early for this and they were so happy. Ahhh and the vision thing. So much to think about.
12/30/2018 c3 anon
Wow I love this! THe beginning of this chapter really had me concerned... the beggining isn;t like will, he is always really soft and carin and he wouldn't walk out on his wife and his baby (also Noah is adorable!).. i hope this is explained soon! stick with this!
12/30/2018 c1 Lillo
I like this, it seems really good! hope you continue x
12/27/2018 c3 llamaaacorn
This is for all 3 chapters. It's really good so far. The beginning of chapter 3 has me worried for the future but it is also really ooc for Will. I'm so glad to have a fanfiction that is focused on sky and zed I just love those two. Anyway this is really good so far and I can't wait to read more.

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