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12/28/2020 c15 4DroidePlane
This chapter is heartbreaking! Now I NEED to know what happens next! You conveyed the emotions that are there in this part of the original story, all while keeping it true to your story and the SW universe. Nice work!
- Dream Plane
12/3/2020 c14 DroidePlane
Oh my, poor Rey and Ben! Your portrayal of Snoke's manipulation is so creepy and devestating. Thank goodness Luke, Han, and Chewie are there to help Ben work through this new info. I can't wait to see what happens next!
12/3/2020 c14 El Droide
Oh no! Poor Ben and Rey. Nice little cliffie though! :)
11/29/2020 c14 38narcissaromanov1918
love it
11/20/2020 c13 4DroidePlane
Oh dear, thank goodness Luke came! I thought it was fascinating how "Rey" turned out to be a Knight of Ren. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter!
-Dream Plane
11/19/2020 c13 El Droide
Oh my goodness, I love this chapter! I had the Black Swan pas-de-deux song in my head the whole time. Hurrah for Luke swooping in and revealing the imposters!
As always, thanks for writing! :)
11/14/2020 c13 17Rapunzella
This chapter was amazing! The introduction of Imposter Rey went exactly how I'd thought it might: I like all of the hints that something might be off, and how you gave Ben reasons to dismiss each one (like how Lady Carise was actually on the right track, but of course he's not going to want to hear it from her). I loved the moments between Ben and his parents early on; that was such a nice set-up for the way they and Luke and Tai rallied behind him when things went wrong, and it's so good to see him accepting help from and working with others rather than feeling like he has to deal with everything alone. I really love how his relationship with Rey in this story has also begun to heal his relationships with his family, and encourage him to let other people into his life a little more.

Han's dance with Greer earlier in this chapter, and the conversation he had with Ben afterwards, was also lovely. The image of Han having a "father-daughter dance" with someone he's mentored reminded me of the relationship he shares with Rey in The Force Awakens. I like getting to see that softer side of his character.

Leia's parting words to Ben when she gave him the lightsaber––that was such a beautiful moment! I can't wait for the next chapter!
11/8/2020 c13 38narcissaromanov1918
love it
10/30/2020 c12 Guest
Oh my goodness, this chapter was intense! I love how you had Luke and Rey team up. I wasn't expecting that. I can't wait for the next chapter!
By the way, El Droide and I now have a FFN account (our name is DroidePlane), so you can PM us if you want.
10/30/2020 c12 El Droide
Well, this chapter was certainly full of twists, but it's all good. Now I have so many questions! Who will the Odile of this tale be? Will Ben be able to see through her deception in time? Will Rey be able to go to the party? AAAAAAAA, the suspense!
Anyhoo, thanks for writing! :)
5/15/2020 c10 Dream Plane
Wow, their stand against Snoke was great! I hope Rey does come to the party though. Nice chapter as always!
4/27/2020 c5 2princess-of-the-sandcastle
“You make me feel safe. MMMMMMMMMM
2/3/2020 c7 lala1224
Aww. Him hug her little port self just melts my heart
2/2/2020 c9 Dream Plane
Wow, Rey has been launched in a whole new world! Chewie and Maz are cute. I like how you portray Han and Leia as ordinary people, not that it's unexpected. I can imagine Rey in a fancy dress, but the Endor dress is pretty cute too. I love how Leia immediately begins acting like a mother to Rey. Rey will be well taken care of by them. The dance and sabaac lessons were adorable and funny too. El Droide and I play chess against our dad the same way. I'm curious to see what will happen to Rey when dawn comes.
Take as much time as you need to write this. I don't mind. I also checked out the Tumblr meta, and there were so many interesting parallels between the "Swan Maiden" stories and Star Wars that I hadn't noticed before. Thanks for recommending it. Looking forward to your next chapter! :)
1/30/2020 c9 El Droide
Squee! So much to love in this chapter! I can totally imagine Rey wearing Leia’s Endor dress. And a night of dance lessons and sabaac! How sweet!
To answer your question about parallels between Star Wars and ballet, I will admit that the parallels I have noticed might not be obvious at first. The ones off the top of my head are like this:
Sleeping Beauty/Episode 4: probably the most striking parallel I’ve seen so far. The hero (Luke/prince dude who’s name I forgot) rescues a princess (Leia/Aurora) with help from someone with inside information about the whole matter (R2D2/lilac fairy). The reason I say R2 is because he shows Luke the hologram, kind of like how the lilac fairy shows the prince a vision of Aurora to get him to help her.
Romeo and Juliet/Episode 2-3: Basically Anakin and Padme’s love. Also the duel between Anakin, Obi-Wan and Dooku in Episode 3 is similar to the duel between Romeo, Romeo’s friend (forgot his name too!), and Tybalt. Obi-Wan/Romeo’s friend gets knocked out of action by Dooku/Tybalt, who then gets killed by Anakin/Romeo.
Giselle/Episode 3. Basically, Giselle/Padme and Albrecht/Anakin are in love, but a “betrayal” wrecks havoc on them (it was mostly unintentional in Alby’s case). At the end of Act 1, Giselle discovers that Albrecht is a nobleman who is (unwillingly) betrothed to a rich lady, while Padme discovers that Anakin had turned to the dark side. Either way, Giselle and Padme both die from broken hearts (kind of dumb concerning Giselle’s case, but this was once again the Romantic Era, when everything was ~sublime~)
That’s that for specific ballets, but there is one trope used in most ballet productions as a comedic element that I think would count as a parallel. There is almost always a minor character (usually a messenger or servant and always a guy) who’s really timid and finicky, especially about his appearance. He’s supposed to seem effeminate or vain (and funny as a result), but to me he’s pretty much a ballet version of C-3PO! So much so that it wouldn’t be odd if he was wearing a gold droid outfit!
Thanks for updating! I’m really looking forward to the next chapter!
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