1/8/2020 c12 Guest
yayyyyy. she finally told him. its really good so far and it is pretty rushed but i totally understand. even though it’s rushed it still made sense, it just needed a little more detail. considering that it is somewhat rushed it’s a solid chapter and i can’t wait for your updates! also good luck on everything that you’re doing in the upcoming weeks :D
yayyyyy. she finally told him. its really good so far and it is pretty rushed but i totally understand. even though it’s rushed it still made sense, it just needed a little more detail. considering that it is somewhat rushed it’s a solid chapter and i can’t wait for your updates! also good luck on everything that you’re doing in the upcoming weeks :D
1/6/2020 c11 Celestine10
Please keep updating and if you don't mind please make this long... because it's eating me alive... I absolutely love this!
Please keep updating and if you don't mind please make this long... because it's eating me alive... I absolutely love this!
1/4/2020 c11 Mondler2017
Even thought its short, I loved it. Why can I see this taking place?! Your a great writer Chloe.
Plzzzzzz dont leave this.
Xoxo
Even thought its short, I loved it. Why can I see this taking place?! Your a great writer Chloe.
Plzzzzzz dont leave this.
Xoxo
1/2/2020 c10 Guest
please please please keep updating. i know it can be tough because ya know life and everything but it’s getting so good. i mean i’m pretty sure mon is pregnant and i kind of want to see how they’ll react and how they’ll deal with everything i’m glad you were still able to update after awhile and i really hope you’ll keep up with the story :D
please please please keep updating. i know it can be tough because ya know life and everything but it’s getting so good. i mean i’m pretty sure mon is pregnant and i kind of want to see how they’ll react and how they’ll deal with everything i’m glad you were still able to update after awhile and i really hope you’ll keep up with the story :D
12/31/2019 c10 Mondler2017
Man i was so happy you updated. And then I realised I've already read this on wattapad. Is there more? Please tell me there is. I love this story so much. Its one of my favs!
Man i was so happy you updated. And then I realised I've already read this on wattapad. Is there more? Please tell me there is. I love this story so much. Its one of my favs!
3/19/2019 c5 Guest
Hi - I don't have an account so I cannot DM you but I just want to say that I don't think you are stealing other people stories. Even if it is the same kind of story, everyone writes different and tell it from a different perspective and I encourage you to keep writing and prove to people who is accusing you that that is not so. Do not be discourage I can understand it takes guts to post a story up and have people critique it and it's easy for people to accuse someone anonymously because they cannot be identified and do it safely behind a computer.
Hi - I don't have an account so I cannot DM you but I just want to say that I don't think you are stealing other people stories. Even if it is the same kind of story, everyone writes different and tell it from a different perspective and I encourage you to keep writing and prove to people who is accusing you that that is not so. Do not be discourage I can understand it takes guts to post a story up and have people critique it and it's easy for people to accuse someone anonymously because they cannot be identified and do it safely behind a computer.
2/3/2019 c8 Guest
whoa this is really good. i love your take on this type of story. you’re doing a great job on the story so far and i can’t wait for your next chapter! :)
whoa this is really good. i love your take on this type of story. you’re doing a great job on the story so far and i can’t wait for your next chapter! :)
12/24/2018 c5 dancer cherrybug
Your story is nothing like anything else I have read. Don't worry about what other people keep saying and keep on doing a great job! I can't wait to read more
Your story is nothing like anything else I have read. Don't worry about what other people keep saying and keep on doing a great job! I can't wait to read more