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9/11/2019 c8 6Zaaaaz0102
Oh nice!
I never would have thought that Mike would have kept his nerves in front of Marcus.
I'm looking forward to see what's gonna happen during the trial. And poor Maddie who can't help blaming herself...
Good job you two
7/7/2019 c1 Cynth8a
Agreed...very exciting and well written chapter!

Marcus Woll...so smarmy and evil! But the toddlrrs sure gave him a run for his money!

So glad the twins were saved before Woll's patience wore out!

So glad that young woman came forward despite knowing what it would cost her. But she obviously wouldn't have been able to live with herself otherwise!

Always have enjoyed Mike and Connie stories! Loved their DA pairing on L and O and in fanfiction.

Also enjoyed the portrayal of Peter Stone. Going to miss him on SVU, I think! He knows his friend...and was trying to take care of the case...his friend...anticipating how to handle everything...and reunite a family...simultaneously! Now, that's a multi tasker!
7/7/2019 c7 42isabella2004
Aw, I’m so glad Kailyn came forward. Woll clearly manipulated her for his own ends so good on her. Lovely reunion for Mike, Connie and the kids and good to see that Peter has everything in hand. Looking forward to more!
7/6/2019 c7 6Zaaaaz0102
Wow happy to see James and Claire okay. Indeed, good job here.
Let's see Connie's reaction with the death penalty in that case. Could she set aside her own values?
"Bon courage" both of you and I hope to read you again and again...
5/27/2019 c6 42isabella2004
Ah, I felt so much for Connie here, especially as a mother, and it must have been so hard for her watching Anna with her kids and not having her own. Her stance on the death penalty is admirable but it was good that she was prepared to let Peter take the case to LA. Good to get some background on the relationship too. Looking forward to more!
5/27/2019 c6 6Zaaaaz0102
Love that chapter, the flashbacks on their past, case with Woll, love the fact that Connie is still against death penalty. I know it's a big moral issue in the USA and the debate is so much a stranger thing to me, who have never lived with in my country...
I'm looking forward to read next chapter
3/30/2019 c5 Guest
Ooh, so good! Poor Maddie...I really hope the twins are going to be ok. What a horrible guy Woll is!
3/25/2019 c5 Cynthia
Very nicely done, authors!

So suspenseful and intense!

Glad to see Mike be able to turn his treatment of Connie around! Selfishly speaking, I have always really liked this pairing! Both have wriiten wonderful fanfiction in the past!

Jack to the rescue! Love his presence in any story!

Look forward to this story moving forward.

Poor Maddie...she had been through alot!
3/23/2019 c5 31mccoylover
I really found the length of a heart beat to embrace line very poetic. An eloquent way to describe the scene.
I also thought the cryptic back to where it all began message was a neat way to move the story to a place where we might run into more of the OG's of LandO. Very smooth. Though I have to admit, I suspect it's going to be harder to nail Woll than it looks. That remark about telling the twins he was Mike's friend...wonder if he's going to try to use that the shield him from a kidnapping charge. Wool is slime but he is smart slime.
3/19/2019 c5 6Zaaaaz0102
Wow, sounds like things are getting worse...
I love that chapter, very emotional. I can imagine Mike blames himself and makes Connie pay for that (I apologize if it's not correct). I can imagine Maddie wanting to fix her "mistakes". Brave Connie and wise Jack, as always...
I eagerly await next chapter!
2/26/2019 c4 42isabella2004
Ooh, well done Maddie protecting her siblings! I hope she hasn’t been shot! I hope she’s shot hulk instead!
2/24/2019 c4 31mccoylover
Maddie is just as strong as Connie. As I have mentioned before, I am not a big Mike/Connie story fan. But this story has really taken off. So much more than some of the Mike loves Connie simplicity that I've seen. I was watching some old episodes today and the Woll ep. came up. YOU nailed his character!I could totally see him engineering revenge on Connie and Mike after they exposed him.
Very unique take on him that fits!
I was relieved to see that you bypassed an ugly rape scenario for Maddie (or worse, preparation for human trafficking which is where I thought Woll might end up taking her) and instead had her make a desperate move to not only save herself but her siblings. It was very believable, as she is around enough criminal lawyers to know what would probably happen to them if Woll had been successful in getting them out of the park.
I know you could go with Maddie being shot but with Clare and James running for the nearest cop, I am assuming if Maddie is indeed the one who got shot, Woll is going to cut his loses and run.

A very powerful installment of a story I plan to watch more closely.
2/23/2019 c4 Cynthia
Wow! Surprising twist! Out loud gasp and widening eyes worthy! Very suspenseful all the way through...especially that ending!

I can see that smug Woll face from here! Evil that he would be capable of targeting children! Icky man! That's a tecnical term for him!
2/22/2019 c4 6Zaaaaz0102
Oh the big bad Woll is back, for the worst... I really hope Maddie or the kids are safe but I have a very, very bad feeling about this...
2/15/2019 c3 42isabella2004
I enjoyed this chapter. Sounds as though Connie and Mike are trying to do their best to keep Maddie grounded when she's at that difficult age. I can also sympathise with Mike not wanting her to grow up too fast!
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