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12/3/2019 c1 AiriHyuga
Hey
I think this was a good start and Sachiko and Yumi are well pictured.
Keep going. I would really like to read more and see which road you take to lead them together.
I leave you a cookie for good work ;-)
4/8/2019 c2 Guest
I haven’t watched Maria Sama Ga Miteru in a while ether, but this story is bringing back all the feels and memories.

Love the tone and the pace which I think matches the anime.

So far I don’t think the characters are OOC from that I remember. The only thing I would change are the length of the chapter, I wish they where longer, but that’s just me being selfish :)
2/24/2019 c2 Guest
Excelente sigue con la historia
2/1/2019 c1 Guest
I should've read the comments before reading. This story has a lot of mistakes. Also, it lacks emotion and character.
2/1/2019 c1 Guest
This is the same old boring plot. Try to be creative.
2/1/2019 c1 2VolpineGrinz
Good setup! Thank you for adding to this fandom. Love marimite and fresh stories.
1/29/2019 c2 Sunshine
This story seems very intresting. Continue doing your best! We, the readers, support you and your story.
1/27/2019 c1 Freespiritedmind
Dont try to divert the topic to your other work. It doesnt matter to me. You should improve yourself and accept criticism as it is. Your story sucks. That's it. Nothing more.
1/27/2019 c1 Freespiritedmind
Please improve your writing. This is a pain to read.
1/25/2019 c1 rijaja.77
Please take the time to write and share a story I master maria sama ga miteru especially my favorite couple is yumi and Sachiko, the series you mentioned have not had the chance to see them, I hope that at the end of your story Sachiko Please take the time to write and share a story I master maria sama ga miteru especially my favorite couple is yumi and Sachiko, the series you mentioned have not had the chance to see them, I hope that at the end of your story Sachiko and yumi they can stay together, they manage to overcome adversities and obstacles, that the family of yumi, the rose, the mother of Sachiko and until the same sure (it would be a big surprise) are all supporting this young couple... other couples that I love in history : Yuuki & touko, sei and youko, shimako and noriko, rei and yoshi... pending the next chapter I'll be... thanks...and yumi they can stay together, they manage to overcome adversities and obstacles, that the family of yumi, the rose, the mother of Sachiko and until the same sure (it would be a big surprise) are all supporting this young couple... other couples that I love in history : Yuuki & touko, sei and youko, shimako and noriko, rei and yoshi... pending the next chapter I'll be... thanks...
1/24/2019 c2 heimdal7
Was a nice thing to wake up to a new chapter this morning. A couple things though. Shouldn't it be sisterly relationship and not sibling relationship Yumi has with Sachiko. Sibling would be more if they were actually related by blood or parent marriage. It is a little confusing if it is Sachiko or Yumi who never met Suguru where you say the two have never met. The part about the photo you having it saying Yumi asked Yumi to send it to her and not asked Yoshino. Otherwise it is good. Keep up the good work!
1/18/2019 c1 Guest
Its a great start for a great story. Keep doing your best, author-san
1/16/2019 c1 6RenMan77
Good start Lovesick Fangirl! Already anticipating the next chapter. Thank you for your story. :-)
1/13/2019 c1 heimdal7
Good start to the story. Poor Suguru though. He takes so much abuse in fanfics just because they glossed over and skipped entirely the reveal in the greenhouse that he is gay in the anime version at the beginning of the series. Or how extremely protective he actually is of Sachiko and Yumi.
1/13/2019 c1 Guest
Very good beginning, would like to see the followings

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