7/29/2020 c49 TitanXyz
Such a great ending for this chapter. I’m very happy to have discovered a well written story.
Such a great ending for this chapter. I’m very happy to have discovered a well written story.
7/23/2019 c21 Darkestphoenix
Ok, I rarely comment, but with this particular chapter you are forcing me to speak up. I think first off, from chapter 20, that zabraks have yellow eyes if they are part of the empire. Secondly, stop with the cringe moments, pls. Also would be nice if we had maybe just a day or a slight insight into Mia and her relationships with Kia and her Cathar partner (i forgot its name)
Ok, I rarely comment, but with this particular chapter you are forcing me to speak up. I think first off, from chapter 20, that zabraks have yellow eyes if they are part of the empire. Secondly, stop with the cringe moments, pls. Also would be nice if we had maybe just a day or a slight insight into Mia and her relationships with Kia and her Cathar partner (i forgot its name)