7/21 c12 30SilverflowerXRavenpaw
Nooo Shenzi deserves better
Give up the leadership if that's what it takes! And fight anyone who stops Ed from eating
Nooo Shenzi deserves better
Give up the leadership if that's what it takes! And fight anyone who stops Ed from eating
5/30 c5 SilverflowerXRavenpaw
Lol forgot to review this chapter so here we are: I like Shenzi's no-nonsense braveness. Gonna earn the dang food, gonna get the dang spot in the pack...
Lol forgot to review this chapter so here we are: I like Shenzi's no-nonsense braveness. Gonna earn the dang food, gonna get the dang spot in the pack...
5/30 c11 SilverflowerXRavenpaw
Okay oof Muuaji deserves better. Hardly any left RIP darlin'. But Usalit k
Okay oof Muuaji deserves better. Hardly any left RIP darlin'. But Usalit k
5/30 c9 SilverflowerXRavenpaw
Ooo I like this buildup! Also don't mind me quietly picking up on lost time
Ooo I like this buildup! Also don't mind me quietly picking up on lost time
2/17 c1 55LadyCordeliaStuart
In reply to a guest review:
Yeah, go ahead and translate! I think it's super cool since I'm learning Russian :) I'm halfway between "numbers 1-10 and 'my name is LadyCordeliaStuart'" and "conversational". So on a scale of 1 being nothing and 10 being fluent, like 4 maybe?
In reply to a guest review:
Yeah, go ahead and translate! I think it's super cool since I'm learning Russian :) I'm halfway between "numbers 1-10 and 'my name is LadyCordeliaStuart'" and "conversational". So on a scale of 1 being nothing and 10 being fluent, like 4 maybe?
2/17 c1 Sandra
Hello) Your fanfic amazing, I like it, but... I want asking you: Can I translate your fan fiction for a Russian site? I will indicate you as the author, I need your consent.
Hello) Your fanfic amazing, I like it, but... I want asking you: Can I translate your fan fiction for a Russian site? I will indicate you as the author, I need your consent.
11/24/2019 c8 Arika Koski
Is there f-bombs that's why it's rated T?
Is there f-bombs that's why it's rated T?
11/8/2019 c7 1Cell Perfecto 32
10/10 This is a very interesting fanfic I must say. I hardly could find any fanfic involving other characters that arent Simba and his family or friends. Until yours came!
What I can say? I really love the hyenas (Shenzi is waifu 3) This story really show the hard life of the hyenas in Lion King universe and how they are raise and taught to be cold hearted towards others (even their own children and brothers) The whole "dark place in the savannah" (as Mufasa said) has a lot more sense with Shenzi's view in your fanfic.
I really loved this whole "sisterly affection" Shenzi has with his "special" brother Ed. But I really think that Muuaji wont stand Ed too much. Sooner or later, he will commit a mistake. I really feel bad for him and more for Shenzi if something happens to him.
What happened with Shenzi's sister thought? Inutashi? I think that was her name right?
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope they meet soon with the lions (Especially Scar)
Don't give up with this story ;)
10/10 This is a very interesting fanfic I must say. I hardly could find any fanfic involving other characters that arent Simba and his family or friends. Until yours came!
What I can say? I really love the hyenas (Shenzi is waifu 3) This story really show the hard life of the hyenas in Lion King universe and how they are raise and taught to be cold hearted towards others (even their own children and brothers) The whole "dark place in the savannah" (as Mufasa said) has a lot more sense with Shenzi's view in your fanfic.
I really loved this whole "sisterly affection" Shenzi has with his "special" brother Ed. But I really think that Muuaji wont stand Ed too much. Sooner or later, he will commit a mistake. I really feel bad for him and more for Shenzi if something happens to him.
What happened with Shenzi's sister thought? Inutashi? I think that was her name right?
Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope they meet soon with the lions (Especially Scar)
Don't give up with this story ;)
10/19/2019 c7 30SilverflowerXRavenpaw
YASSSSSS ED IS HUNTING
300/10 would scream like a maniac when I read
YASSSSSS ED IS HUNTING
300/10 would scream like a maniac when I read