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4/29 c5 6Rainlight2427
I am? /screaming?

I decided to log back into fanfiction kind of on a whim after finally watching season 3 and this chapter is PERFECTION.

I mean come on, framing Sheena? Dr Bellum's shipping war? And omg the last section of the chapter...Gray is in for a surprise. God. I know it's been a while since your last update, but I just wanted to check in just in case you happen to see this because your writing is always so thrilling.
10/12/2019 c5 6Calantha S
This is an amazing story. Truly! I love your pacing and the detail in your writing. I also enjoy the relationship building. I’m a PlayDiego fan, myself, but no matter who you ship, the friendships, the dynamics between all characters are so great. I especially love the tidbits and highlighting the information about where they’re at, just like they do in the show/game. I just started watching Carmen Sandiego and am so thrilled to have come across a wonderful fan fiction. Thank you!
10/5/2019 c5 Random Guest
I am so happy that you updated! I have loved this story since the beginning. You have a real talent with your writing and you give so much life to the characters. I know real life gets in the way of updates, which makes this one so much more special! I can't wait for the next one, whenever it may be, you've got me hanging off the edge of my seat! Happy writing!
9/26/2019 c5 115ko-chan-the-blueberry-donut
This is very good! I love this! So glad you updated!
9/25/2019 c5 Ish
Ooooooooh! I'm so excited for the next chapter! Your writing is awesome!
3/25/2019 c4 Guest
the scene with the water balloons and the toast was beautiful, and it makes a lot of sense that Shadowsan would tell Sheena to do that to her because I felt like there really wasn't much of a reason for Sheena to hate Black Sheep in the show. Please update more often, you're one of the very few fanfics I could find that's based off the reboot, ships Red Crackle, and most importantly, is actually well-written. I look forward to the next update!
3/15/2019 c1 12LouTheStarSpeaker
Okay, first off, I love this! The story seems very well thought out, and Player has so much character! He's my favorite character in the show even surpassing ( just barely) Carmen herself, and you certainly did him justice! I can't wait to see what you have in store next, especially with the doughnut shop and the introduction of Ivy and Zack. One peice of constructive criticism though, there are a few points in the story where you switch from the present tense to the past tense. Nothing big, but it is a little distracting. Now I'm off to read your net to chapters! Keep writing!

~Lou
3/12/2019 c3 23rommie-rules
I NEED CHAPTER FOUR!
3/10/2019 c3 6Rainlight2427
aaaaHHHhHHHH you absolute psychopath oh my god oh my god oh my god.

First of all the cupcake flashback. Sorry, I don't recall giving permission to let your writing stop my goddamn heart holy crap. The two of them are just so..so genuine and vulnerable and close in that moment and the Gray's lonely, celebratory cupcake in the present makes me want to hug them both.

In the same vein — that is, Gray and Carmen's relationship — why does he not remember Carmen? What did Vile do to him? God, he better remember her soon.

And oh god, that one moment when he found out Black Sheep was allegedly dead... You did such a great job, as always, in emulating how his world kind of just..stopped. Paper Star was really creepy and awesome here too!

Carmen's reality check—oof. Hehe, those "annoying kids from Boston." Gotta love Player.

As always, I look forward to your update. Great job!
- Rain
3/5/2019 c2 Guest
What the heck, how are you such a good writer!? Your transitions between dialogue and events are great! On the edge of my seat the whole time, can’t wait till the next update!
3/5/2019 c1 Guest
I love this so much. It seems like you spent a lot of time writing it and you have great diction! Great job!
3/4/2019 c3 SassySapphire
My birth is on August 16 too!
3/2/2019 c1 Guest
I can't wait to see Gray's reaction to Carmen being alive. That twist was brilliant and realistic. Hopefully it'll happen when Vile outright says she needs to be hunted down for extra drama and inner turmoil.
3/2/2019 c3 WolvesRock14
Is it wrong that I kinda wanna give Gray a hug? Like, yes the guy’s evil and all, but still. To have been told that your (used to be) best friend died when she actually didn’t? I can’t imagine what that feels like or what it’s going to feel like when he finds out. Ouch. Anyway, awesome chapter, as always. I can’t wait to read the next one! :)
2/28/2019 c3 42catlovingmermaid
Amazing
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