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12/29/2020 c29 25SailorChronos1
Wow, two abductions, one good and one not, both teams ruthlessly efficient. I hope that both targets will be okay!
12/29/2020 c29 Coreenmm
Awesome and love all your chapters.
I enjoy how the team works together to save one of their own. Thank you.
12/27/2020 c28 SailorChronos1
Uh oh, the net seems to be closing on all fronts. Olawale suspects he's being pursued, the Team is pulling out all the stops to get Root back. I'm sure all this is going to come to a head soon. Here's hoping the good guys won't be too late.
12/27/2020 c28 Coreenmm
thank you.
12/22/2020 c27 elaine0510
Just did some catch up on some chapters and I’m sure glad I did! Great chapters. Each chapter leaves you wanting more!
12/22/2020 c27 Coreenmm
Cliff hanger. Really enjoyed this chapter. Thank you!
12/22/2020 c27 SailorChronos1
What a contrast between the two scenes. Two different people effectively forced to go dark under Samaritan and yet still not safe, still hunted. Who knows if their paths will cross at some point?
12/20/2020 c26 4Alongusername
A nicely sized Chapter out now! What a return to this great world that you’ve made from a show that so many love. Now I’ll admit that I had to read a few of your latest chapters to get back into the flow of the story. But I know that you spend a lot of time updating these things! I know that it's been a while now. Finch seems to have rumbled the scheme despite the work of Greer, but he’s used his influence to reach further than any of us thought. With Decima and Samaritan, that might be reconstituted, who knows what he can be up to! Team Machine might need some help with this one. I wonder if we’ll get some more action with Root soon? But what a scene we had with her. Kara Stanton is back too, and your write her in such an enticing way. I’m hopeful for more from you.
12/20/2020 c26 Coreenmm
Great chapter. I kept wondering about all of them and what happened.
Thank you!
12/20/2020 c26 25SailorChronos1
What's our Team going to do now? They must know it's a trap, from what Reese said. But Shaw's too quick to notice little details, and she's going to be on the warpath now. None of them are people you really want to get angry.
12/9/2020 c25 SailorChronos1
I had to read a few chapters to get back into the swing of things because it's been a while. Wow, the reach of Samaritan and Greer has reached farther than many people anticipated. For someone to be calling Finch for help might be unprecedented. I hope the Team can find Root and finally get to the bottom of this.
12/6/2020 c25 4Alongusername
And I thought you were done with this story! Back to it after a slight delay, I see. Yet so much character and so much story is left to be told and explained to us. Still, you have the same amazing writing style and the same love to craft these stories. I love the richness your characters give to the story. It's like I’m watching a film play out, with all of these supporting characters moving around with small storylines and sub-plots that will perhaps diverge with the main ones. With them, the story is much improved! The locations are astounding as always and I find that you’re one of the most dedicated writers here! Keep it up.
12/4/2020 c24 Guest
OMG , it was so good , cant believe the story done there ... more more more please .
11/17/2020 c24 JanelleCoulton
Fantastic, I so enjoyed reading this. You are so talented. I would love to read more of your stuff. Do you have a website where you write?
5/26/2019 c24 25SailorChronos1
I like how you've interwoven all the threads in this story so far. Eventually readers will see the entire tapestry for what it is, but in the meantime let's enjoy the mystery. I hope the Team can get to Root in time.
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