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I'm digging this! Suspenseful, messy, emotional- this is a great story so far. I'll be eagerly watching for new updates, and in the meantime, I hope things are going well for you.
I'm digging this! Suspenseful, messy, emotional- this is a great story so far. I'll be eagerly watching for new updates, and in the meantime, I hope things are going well for you.
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Here's hoping Amy will be okay. And her family. But Connor and Hank are on the case now, so of course they will be.
Here's hoping Amy will be okay. And her family. But Connor and Hank are on the case now, so of course they will be.
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Aw, poor Con. He's under a lot of pressure. I hope he opens up to one of his friends about it soon.
Aw, poor Con. He's under a lot of pressure. I hope he opens up to one of his friends about it soon.
5/24/2019 c31 Guest
God fuck this chapter really made me cry
God fuck this chapter really made me cry
5/22/2019 c31 Adilaya
Hi
First, I really hope you gonna update soon as it is one of the best Detroit fanfic I have ever read. Well done! I love how you didn't make Connor Hank's roommate immediately as most fics tend to do. And I loved even more how you made him a "rival" for Markus in New Jericho. I really really loved it because it made sense, it created a middle ground Connor, not one who's all best buddy with Jericho neither a new found son for Hank. It was nuanced, carefully crafted. I like the idea of a divided Jericho between the two leaders. It's so clever. So I hope you 'll publish another chapter soon.
The only thing I don' t like are Amy's flashbacks. There are a tad too many of them and I feel like they slow the pace of the story down. (and I want more Connor in action scenes ). I'll be waiting and once again, very good job!
Hi
First, I really hope you gonna update soon as it is one of the best Detroit fanfic I have ever read. Well done! I love how you didn't make Connor Hank's roommate immediately as most fics tend to do. And I loved even more how you made him a "rival" for Markus in New Jericho. I really really loved it because it made sense, it created a middle ground Connor, not one who's all best buddy with Jericho neither a new found son for Hank. It was nuanced, carefully crafted. I like the idea of a divided Jericho between the two leaders. It's so clever. So I hope you 'll publish another chapter soon.
The only thing I don' t like are Amy's flashbacks. There are a tad too many of them and I feel like they slow the pace of the story down. (and I want more Connor in action scenes ). I'll be waiting and once again, very good job!
5/11/2019 c31 16RachelClaire
Really love this. The characterisation is great and I’m intrigued as to where this is going. Are we going to see Cyberlife rear it’s ugly head at some point? Looking forward to seeing more of this, and hope your recovery from surgery is going well!
Really love this. The characterisation is great and I’m intrigued as to where this is going. Are we going to see Cyberlife rear it’s ugly head at some point? Looking forward to seeing more of this, and hope your recovery from surgery is going well!
3/9/2019 c30 34Britt30
So gooooood! Also Connor, please chill. Excited to see what happens next! Keep being awesome!
So gooooood! Also Connor, please chill. Excited to see what happens next! Keep being awesome!
3/8/2019 c22 Britt30
OK, hi, sorry. I mad eit chapter 22 before finally pausing to review. This is so good. So so so so so good. Your characterizations are spot on and you bring up some great points with androids and beaurocracy and I love how you write Connors processing! Onto the next chapter!
OK, hi, sorry. I mad eit chapter 22 before finally pausing to review. This is so good. So so so so so good. Your characterizations are spot on and you bring up some great points with androids and beaurocracy and I love how you write Connors processing! Onto the next chapter!